Shatter

[thundersquall]

Title: Shatter
Pairing: Yesung/Ryeowook
Rating: R
Word count: 7,133
Summary: Jongwoon hates his new half-brother that his father springs on him suddenly, the result of a long-term affair. But he has to battle with his conscience when he falls in love with him.
WARNINGS: Incest, character death

Written for emilycullenx , based on her prompt. I hope this doesn’t let

Comments

[loveisonthemenu]

SHEENA. OH SHEENA. /CRIES
ILYSFM RIGHT NOW. SPOTTING.

[loveisonthemenu]

FUCK. SHEENA, THIS IS THE BEST INCEST FIC I HAVE EVER READ. AND NOT BECAUSE IT'S YEWOOK. okay yeah, it's because of yewook. BUT THIS FIC MAKES YOU LOOK LIKE A FUCKIN' GENIUS

[thundersquall]

CRYING, AMY YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO ME, FOR SERIOUS. <333333

I just - kept thinking this was really really bad. It's rushed and terrible and cliched and I was worried as hell. I was so dead and drained writing this. ;___; But if you liked it then I'm so relieved. *weeps on you*

I was NOT about to write drunken sex. D: That would be progressing a little too fast, y/y?

I DON'T WANT INCEST BROWNIES, JFC, INCEST SQUICKS THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF ME. MAYBE THAT'S WHY I COULDN'T WRITE THIS WELL ENOUGH. DDDDD:

[loveisonthemenu]

NO, YOU'RE THE ONE WHO'S TOO GOOD TO ME FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING FIC. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

omg, poor you. i can't believe you got overworked by pairing bias. but don't worry because all your energy was put to good use, because i just read the fic like 2 times, and i'm going to read a third time. god, i'm pathetic but i don't care.

idek why but i thought there was going to be drunken sex or something. then ryeowook ran away and i was like, "...whut?"
but you're right, that would be too fast.

INCEST MUST NOT SQUICK YOU BECAUSE YOU DID WRITE THIS WELL ENOUGH. YOU WRITE TOO WELL. /CRIES HAPPY TEARS

okay, back to reading again and feeding my love for these two.

[chibi_roses]

Sheena bb what were you talking about? This was so intense, like woah, it was superb. Stop your worrying.

I completely missed the character death warning bit, so I was not expecting that.

I wanted to cry for poor Ryeowook, seriously, not just at the end where Yesung was the only person at his funeral (and omg that's just so sad, so so sad, the more I think about it I actually tear up) but throughout the whole fic, being all lost and alone in the beginning and then just clinging to Yesung the whole time, the only person he has left and who loves him in any way.

<33333

[thundersquall]

I can't help but worry, Ali, you know how much I struggled with this. D: *clings, cries into your arms* I'm so glad you liked this, it makes me so much more relieved, because I trust you. ♥

D: I'm sorry about the deaths. *cries* I couldn't think how to make them be together, because you know I don't like to break up YeWook, but obviously they can't ever be together because this is so wrong and incest is never going to be right, so... this was what my fucked-up mind came up with. DDD:

Please don't cry, bb. *huggles*

[chibi_roses]

I know you struggled bb, but honestly it worked out so well and flows effortlessly *hugs back*

(Yewook) character deaths make my heart break, this just shattered it into pieces DD: But I'll forgive you.

[thundersquall]

Ali, crying, character deaths tear me apart too, especially when it's YeWook. But better that they can be together in death, than separated in life! *flails dramatically*

Happier YeWook coming up next, promise! ♥

[ha3ngbok]

ohh I'll read it later :D

[ha3ngbok]

god forget that I read it anyway...

this is the first incest I've ever read and this is just phenomenal.

when Ryeowook says he loves Yesung it's like a bullet that hit me fast over and over. It's so genuine and painful at the same time! You are a goddess for giving such a feeling~

I love it so much. I like how it's kinda comedy-ish with Yesung coming because of dreams and how romance and angst is mixed in with everything. The ending... is so sad. I just do hope that they meet (OMG WHAT AM I THINKING THIS IS A FIC BUT IT MOVES ME SO MUCH T_T)this is so good ^_~ I can't wait for more YeWook's and KyuMin's from you :D

[thundersquall]

Omg, your comment, it makes me feel SO RELIEVED. *glomps you*

I was really afraid that this wouldn't be good, because I was really struggling with it at the start and I wrote it all in one sitting, and I was so scared it would be too rushed or unrealistic or something, omg. D:

DON'T WORRY I WANT THEM TO MEET TOO. SOMEHOW. ;____;

Thank you so so much, you're so encouraging. *hugs*

[ha3ngbok]

dawww *hugs back* I actually totally forgot to check the rating and thought that this was going to be some smutty fic and all, but dayum it wasn't~ it does feel realistic! (like how your other fics felt like x3)

I do toooooo T_T woot married OTP is married

*encourages you more* :DDDDD

[shiryu_yugure]

jKFJFDJKSLFJLSFJLSJFKDSFJLS I TOLD YOU IT WAS FINE, IT IS MORE THAN FINE, IT IS GORGEOUS AND HELLO HEARTBREAK, I KIND OF MISSED YOU ;_______;

I could have used the warning that Ryeo was gonna get hit by a van, of all things, BUT BEYOND THAT. AS I SAID, YOUR PANIC POSITIVELY CORRELATES DIRECTLY TO THE RESULTING FIC. THE WIN. I WILL SPAZZ AT YOU ON GCHAT LATER. ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[thundersquall]

I INDICATED 'CHARACTER DEATH' UNDER WARNINGS. DDDD:

I DIDN'T WANT TO KILL THEM, I DIDN'T. *SOBS FOREVER* I LOVE THEM. ♥

[lovetails]

i have always liked ur writing, i just couldn't remember if i ever left a comment to tell you that ;p

i sort of forgot bout the character death warning in the middle, when ryeowook died i couldn't close my mouth anymore
and the end is really tragic *wails*

but despite all these tragedies the story is still beautiful. i love it so much!

[thundersquall]

*fails* Tbh, I can't remember either. Don't worry about it! It's okay if you don't comment, I'm just happy to know you like my stuff. =D

I'm sorry! *wails with you* I wish they didn't have to die either, but it's an incest fic; they never ever end well. D:

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you reading and liking this! <33333