TORCHWOOD FIC: CLOSE CALL

[thundernight_86]

Title: Close Call

Author: thundernight_86

Pairing: Jack/Ianto

Warnings: Ok first of all this is slash, this means male on male relationship. If you don't like or don't approve of gay couples stop reading HERE! Don't say I didn't warn you! Secondly, there will be an explicit sex scene (GASP can't believe it! XD)...again if you don't like don't read it

Comments

[royalladyemma]

This may be the first time you've ever written it down, but something tells me it's not your first time!!!!!

This was great! It was more than 'just' sex, there was true affection and passion between Jack & Ianto. You made it very clear that they're not just 'f*ck buddies'

You described the others and their activities to a T! Yes, Owen would be sleeping (or cruising internet porn), Gwen would be just mindlessly doodling (at least it wasn't on a report), and our lovely Toshiko would be giving it her best effort (altho she'd much rather be plucking away on one of her computer programs).

My only question is, what became of the giant octopus creature, now lying dead in Cardiff Bay? Usually, no matter what happens, the aliens are secured some where away from the prying eyes of the public. Shall we pretend that when the bullets punctured it's big bulbous head-part that it reacted like a punctured balloon -- the force of the escaping air sent it shooting upwards, thru the atmosphere and the statosphere and into outer space, where now it's just a hazard in the local shipping lanes?

Smoochies on a great job!!!! Keep it up!!!!!

[thundernight_86]

Well I fantasize a lot about the boys, so that's not new to me...only the writing it down is!! XD

Yup! I've always seen their relationship as something more than a "part time shag" or else Jack wouldn't be so devastated in COE (Though I still refuse to aknowledge that THAT ever happened!!!! Ianto can't be dead!)

Glad you liked the team's activities! LOL it was fun to write!

Now the octopus alien...you're right...I should have wrote what happened to it...ok let's pretend that, as it was an acquatic alien creature, when it gets killed his body liquefy (to water) so there aren't any problems about having to take care of the body! XD doeas it work??? LOL

Thanks for the review! I'll work on a new fic soon!

[royalladyemma]

Remind me not to eat fish from the Bay for a while!!!

Looking forward to more reading!!!