[fic] you got wires coming out of your skin

Dec 23, 2010 11:53

title: you got wires
characters: John Callahan, Lena Austen, mentions of Sonny.
summary: Rizzy wanted backstory for some of the Original Characters we play at beyondtherift. She wanted a peak as to how they spent last year's Christmas. And she wanted horrible. I fused it all together. :|
warning: Rated R. Violence, abuse, triggery stuff, SERIOUSLY, IT'S ( Read more... )

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likewinning December 23 2010, 20:43:49 UTC
ELLA, THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING. I love how beautifully you managed to write this even though there are terrible, terrible things happening. I love the contrast, like Rizzy said - the abrupt switches between Lena's and John's POVs made this SO FUCKING INTENSE to read the whole way through. I loooove all the history here and the imagery, oh man. You know how sometimes you read things and you can just see everything perfectly in your head? This was one of those times.

And I love the closing lines so much because it's just... so brilliant and fucked up. Like, even though John's ward is gone now, even if Lena physically gets away from Rick, they're still always going to be there.

fkdjsks, yeah. YOU ARE KIND OF PERFECT, OKAY.

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throughworlds December 23 2010, 20:58:54 UTC
;aslkdf;alskdfa /FLAILS THANK YOU. I THINK YOU NOW SEE WHY I'D LOVE YOUR CHRISTMAS PRESENT SO MUCH. :x

I'm just as;lkfa so glad that came through because I wasn't... sure if it would, and I got uncomfortable writing it to a point, just because it was something I really COULD see in my head but dealing with the themes gratuitously to a point always makes me squirm. I had to purge it from my system or something. :x

AAAH THANK YOU FOR READING AND REVIEWING THIS HORRIBLE CHRISTMAS STORY ;__;

NO U ARE PERFECT. And now you know why John and Anya's CR makes me so fucking happy. I want to throw both my kids at yours since they aren't leaving me any time soon. :>>>

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likewinning December 23 2010, 21:26:31 UTC
YOU ARE WELCOME. LMFAO, I DO SEE THAT. :x

I know what you meeeeean. I loved writing yours but pretty much the whole way through I was like jshdfjdakadfd. true story. :>

OF COURSE, I LOVE READING ALL THINGS ELLA EVEN WHEN THEY ARE SCARY. ;___; <3

:D I dooooooo. John definitely deserves some ridiculousness in his life after all this, I mean really. :>>> THAT IS GOOD BECAUSE I WANT ALL YOUR KIDS ALWAYS. :X

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throughworlds December 23 2010, 23:28:08 UTC
I ALSO LOVE HOW I SAY 'DON'T READ' AND YOU GUYS READ. LMFAO, YOU GUYS. ilu all. /cozy hug

omg but your fic was more amazing than words can say and i had to go back and read it again today TRUE STORY

I JUST TOOK THE MOST RANDOM NAP. @_@ /random also

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likewinning December 24 2010, 01:18:38 UTC
RULES WERE MEANT TO BE BROKEN, ELLA. ETC. we love you, too! /snugs

fdksksk you. your FACE is more amazing than words can say true story. /is twelve

ME TOO ELLA, ME TOO. Except I took what can more accurately be called a coma omg so hungry nowwwwwww. ;___;

unf, Milo, you STOP THAT RIGHT NOW. :|

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