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Ohohohoh... what doth I find in my massive fanfic files? A somewhat completed TLW fanfic that I wrote? The beginning and ending aren't exactly smooth, and it's possibly a bit awkward but meh, I wrote it a while ago. Not even sure when I started this but here it is for borg_princess <3
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But oh, that little brat! So she ran off with the jewels and damn Marguerite anyway? Grr! *claws at her*
I really like your Veronica POV on Marguerite, the way she assesses her character and realizes that there's many things she admires about Marguerite and would like to emulate. Her earlier callous attitude was wearyingly familiar- Marguerite's going to be sacrificed and she wants to make snide comments like 'Why is it that trouble always follows us whenever she’s involved?/'thick as thieves- isn’t that how the saying goes', I mean, SERIOUSLY?!- but this new perspective is very welcome. :D
I LOVE the resolution to this crisis. V stabbing Marguerite? OMFG, HA! That is DIABOLICAL! I don't know how V learnt the significance of the dagger- was she familiar with the tribe's beliefs?- but that is such an awesome twist.
“If it’s for any reason other than it cleansing the supposedly evil spirit in me, thereby appeasing the gods, and turning me into a good and proper human, I’m going to be VERY upset.”
Heh. Marguerite's rant, actually, her entire reaction has me in stitches. And that family scene is very cute and heartwarming. You do group conversations very well, I'm afraid I'm more comfortable with just dealing with two at a time, or three at most, lol.
Great fic, enjoyed reading it and THANK YOU for posting it for me! *wriggles* So cool, I didn't even have to bribe you! :D
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