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Round 1: Jack/Liz Submissions -- NOW CLOSED

Oct 30, 2008 21:47

Below are the prompts. Please submit your drabbles as a reply to this entry. And remember - HAVE FUN!

( The prompts - Round One )

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Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 01:23:40 UTC

Jack was turning fifty fairly soon. He told himself not to worry about it; it was just another birthday, and he was reasonably healthy for a man his age. But his inner voice's mention of 'health' brought about a list of issues men over fifty routinely experienced. Difficulty achieving and maintaining an erection, less firm erections, decreased sex drive (even for a Catholic, it was difficult to believe God could be so cruel), and many health problems that didn't have to do with the sexual use of his penis. (To be perfectly frank, he wasn't ready to think about the phrase 'enlarged prostate ( ... )

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG regalish November 2 2008, 02:27:11 UTC

Awww, this is great! And pretty much what I had in mind when I came up with this prompt -- some good old Jack insecurity about the big birthday.

I love the bit about him still adoring her in twelve years. Because yeah, he would. :D

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 03:44:56 UTC

Thank you! And yes, I'm also sure he would. :)

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG midnightxgarden November 2 2008, 02:59:38 UTC

Oh Jack. How could you be concerned that Liz wouldn't adore you? *sigh*

I think I've figured out what makes your writing so awesome (to me). You can take any situation and makes it sound fresh and realistic and them. It's a testament to both you and Tina for creating/exploring characters that have such depth and are so lovable despite (possibly because of) their misgivings and failings.

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 04:10:18 UTC

I think that's why I like writing them so much. Because, just by virtue of how distinct and complex they are, there's a whole lot of interesting things one can write. Oh, Tina, I love you. And thank you!

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG lavenderseaslug November 2 2008, 03:22:44 UTC

"Wow, you must really have feelings for me. So how about you focus on that? That you've found a woman you like enough to imagine still wanting to do her when she's fifty. And that I'll still want to do it with you when you're sixty-two." - Oh the romance of Jack and Liz. It makes me do a happy dance every time you write such wonderful things.

This was lovely and sweet, and anytime anyone uses the word 'adore' it makes me enjoy whatever is being talked about a little bit more.

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 04:11:39 UTC

Thank you! And I'm glad to stumble upon your enjoyment of the word 'adore.'

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG ladyanneboleyn November 2 2008, 05:38:22 UTC

This is pretty much the most adorable thing I've ever read.

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 05:58:23 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG littleninja245 November 2 2008, 13:52:58 UTC

"Doesn't knowing I believe that I'll still adore you in twelve years make you feel better?"

Awww!! ♥♥

I love this; it's far too cute! XD
And it sounds just like a conversation about this between them would do. :)

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 23:49:35 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG stamatina_rae November 2 2008, 16:14:50 UTC

This was perfect! Your writing is always so spot on. I could totally see Jack and Liz having this conversation.

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 2 2008, 23:50:00 UTC

Thank you! :)

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG csi_miamie126 November 4 2008, 12:50:53 UTC

Aww. Poor Jack and him reaching the stage of such... Things. He can survive this with his eyes closed. He is Jackie D! Age is nothing but dust to him.

Nice work you got here. :D

Re: Another Day Older (At Least I'm Not In Debt), Jack/Liz, the big 5-0, PG michellek November 5 2008, 01:08:28 UTC

Yes, he will be fine. I have faith in him!

Thank you!

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