Round 1: Jack/Liz Submissions -- NOW CLOSED

Oct 30, 2008 21:47

Below are the prompts. Please submit your drabbles as a reply to this entry. And remember - HAVE FUN!

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It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek October 31 2008, 05:40:10 UTC
She says: "I can't believe I'm getting married."

He says: "Neither can I."

"Well. Thanks."

"Lemon--"

"It's fine. You didn't think anyone would want to marry me, and that's fine."

There's another explanation, of course. (She's always had a way of jumping to the wrong conclusion.) Something about how he didn't expect his chance with her to slip through his fingers. Something about how he's spent a good chunk of their friendship expecting her to be his second wife (the first who'd spend most of their time together liking him). He could tell her, has almost done so several times since she announced her engagement. He could tell her, but there's no benefit in it. (He's sure her ignorance of his feelings for her is willful.)

"Well," he says finally. "I will admit I was wrong."

"That's kind of your only choice, though."

He's silent for a moment. "You're right."

(He tries to think of an excuse he could use to get out of attending the wedding.)

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG op_de_radio October 31 2008, 07:47:28 UTC
I've been doing the same thing! I've also been trying to write a decent drabble of my own.

:]

I loved it. Awesome job.
The first of many drabbles I shall love.

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 1 2008, 06:40:31 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 1 2008, 06:40:10 UTC
Thank you so much!

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG regalish October 31 2008, 23:05:31 UTC
Something about how he's spent a good chunk of their friendship expecting her to be his second wife (the first who'd spend most of their time together liking him).

Awwww, Jack. :(

This was sad and beautiful. It would be rather like Jack to expect Liz to just always "be there."

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 1 2008, 06:56:44 UTC
Thank you! I definitely could see Jack assuming she'll need him forever and finding that's not the case.

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG lynn_42 November 1 2008, 21:42:41 UTC
Aww, poor Jack! I definitely think that Jack would be in shock that Liz would get married before he would get remarried. And that she wouldn't get married to him. Fantastic drabble!

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 2 2008, 03:47:54 UTC
Thank you!

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG cecism November 2 2008, 03:30:38 UTC
I don't know how you managed to make that so wistful and sad (yet totally beautiful) in so few words, but you did. I loved this.

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 2 2008, 03:48:26 UTC
Thank you so much. :)

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG western_skies November 3 2008, 02:19:07 UTC
How about...he convinces Tracy to come up with a plot involving Ninjas and Liz being kidnapped? You know, temporarily. Because no Liz = no wedding. Yes?

Very very lovely, but also crushing.

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 3 2008, 05:19:52 UTC
I like to think that maybe the wedding won't happen? Or that she'll get divorced?

Thank you.

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG csi_miamie126 November 4 2008, 12:40:29 UTC
Last line was gold. :D The fic was beautiful, sad, yes, but beautiful.

*hugs*

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Re: It's Hard To Believe, Isn't It?, Jack/Liz, marrying someone else, PG michellek November 5 2008, 01:05:59 UTC
Thank you! :)

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