Comments | thistlefics: [fic] And Your Enemies Closer (Harry, Draco, PG)

thistlefics

[fic] And Your Enemies Closer (Harry, Draco, PG)

Jan 14, 2006 15:26

And Your Enemies Closer

Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry, Draco (no ships)
Rating: PG
Summary: While Horcrux hunting, Harry manages to capture one of his enemies. Now he has to decide what to do with him.
A/N: For allisonblair, who boldly requested a ficlet involving Harry, Draco, and an apple. 830 words.

( He tried to feel smug satisfaction, but it wouldn't come. )

character: harry potter, fandom: harry potter, character: draco malfoy

Comments 16

mellafe January 14 2006, 15:34:26 UTC

more?

Ok, so I want to know exactly HOW this is going to lead to sex. hahaha.

Seriously, though, somehow the fact that Draco threw the apple to the floor REALLY bugged me, so I want Harry to do nasty things to him now. :P

thistlefics January 14 2006, 15:52:10 UTC

Umm...it's not. Because they hate each other. And I loathe that ship. *g* But I'm cool with putting them in a room and making them fight.

Harry might threaten him with torture. Or he might actually torture him by reading Ginny's love letters out loud to him. Or something. *g* Draco's not getting out of this unscathed.

mellafe January 14 2006, 16:29:41 UTC

BUT THIS SHIP IS FUN!! It's all about the sex, really. :P

NOOOOOOO, poor boy! I think I'd die if I had to listen to Ginny's love letters. ACK!! *gags* :D

Aren't we glad this is NOT our OTP? :D

thistlefics January 14 2006, 22:12:36 UTC

But why should I care about a ship that's only about sex? *g* Draco doesn't deserve Harry.

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smoo_001 January 14 2006, 15:50:37 UTC

Oh very nice start indeed. I don't even care if there's no H/D in the story, it looks intersting enough, if you decide to contiue if of course :)

thistlefics January 14 2006, 15:53:36 UTC

Thanks! *g*

Well, the chance of this leading to H/D are about zero to none. I think they're going to spend the night trying to break each other without breaking themselves. No sex.

Fic: And Your Enemies Closer secondsilk January 14 2006, 18:43:43 UTC

So it's come down to just the two of them again, and em passe, and the setting is so Princess Bride to me.
The thought of having them there like that is remarkably intriguing, as Draco won the only real fight they've ever had, but Harry's in charge this time.

Re: Fic: And Your Enemies Closer thistlefics January 14 2006, 22:13:44 UTC

Well, Harry won the physical fight in this fic, but I wonder if he'll win the mental contest going on. I hope so. *g*

Thanks!

latentfunction January 14 2006, 21:21:17 UTC

You know, I don't even remember requesting this, but I'm glad you wrote it! I like how sort of useless Harry is. If it comes down to situations like this in book seven, which I think it will, I don't know how he'll get around it on his own. Thanks!

thistlefics January 14 2006, 22:15:17 UTC

It was last February. I've had the request post at the top of my journal all year so people know I haven't forgotten. *g*

Anyway, you're welcome. Glad you found it realistic!

archon_mentha February 9 2006, 12:19:43 UTC

Nice!

I do love H/D slash, so I can see where the temptation would be incredible to slash this one. That said? I like this piece much better this way, as gen. You show the weaknesses in both boys very nicely: Malfoy is mean and spiteful and not very sympathetic, and he really does get to Harry, now matter how much Harry should be paying attention to Voldemort or Snape instead.

thistlefics February 9 2006, 15:23:04 UTC

Thanks so much!

*g*

Yeah, I loathe H/D, and I said so when I offered to do ficlets. But I also said that if anyone wanted the characters they'd get them, only it would be gen. And allisonblair boldly requested just that.

So, yes, I'm evil. ;)