paperlegends Story - Line of Dance, part 3

[thismaz]

For notes, see part one

Comments

[ningloreth]

"And your name?"

"Myrddin, Sire." ... "Well, Myrddin," Arthur said...

You turnip-head, Arthur! I really like the way you make us feel Merlin's exclusion from the camaraderie in Arthur's tent.

And I love the map, too!

[thismaz]

Isn't the map brilliant? I was so amazed when I saw it, how well choco_souffle had copied the style of the one the BBC produced, while making is fit the story.

You turnip-head, Arthur!
*grins at you* It's really not his fault that he isn't expecting Merlin to pull a stunt like that.

Thank you.

[asherlev1]

SO great. I love the dynamic of Merlin being a faceless servant in King Arthur's camp and trying to work his way up the ranks.

[thismaz]

Thank you, so much. I love your description, there. It's spot on.