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Sep 18, 2004 22:35


When the winter came, people grew quieter and the trees were left barren. Standing in the middle of the town, you could hear only the muted blue screen light of TVs glaring on previously warm faces, you could hear only the singsong of cash registers. What made it hard was that the town had died not a rapid death: a car crash would have been ( Read more... )

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telephonic September 18 2004, 19:36:23 UTC
I read it, and it is simply amazing.

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thislittleboy September 18 2004, 19:37:22 UTC

you couldn't have possibly read it in such a short time!

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telephonic September 18 2004, 19:45:56 UTC
I read pretty fast

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thislittleboy September 18 2004, 19:46:31 UTC

wow, teach me.

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___one7eight September 18 2004, 19:46:38 UTC
it flows so beautifully, and its filled with such bittersweet warmth.

when are you going to write a book?! (that was me saying i loved it!)

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When you feel desprouted .... servethejewel September 18 2004, 20:48:28 UTC
my opinion isnt worth much but i thought it was beautiful.
& i love the mentions of strawberry milks

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Re: When you feel desprouted .... servethejewel September 19 2004, 00:17:43 UTC
hehe i said milks

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thislittleboy September 19 2004, 13:51:58 UTC

how are you so convinced your opinion is worthless?

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re_fract September 18 2004, 20:58:48 UTC
i read it.
and it was absolute perfection.
please keep doing just this.

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pyrofighter September 18 2004, 21:05:50 UTC
i love how your stories are so beautifuly writen without tons of action.

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thislittleboy September 19 2004, 13:50:04 UTC

that's essentially what i strive for. thank you for this. xo

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