[fic] Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle - Heaven Don't Hear Me

[lingers]

Title: Heaven Don't Hear Me
Author: winged_requiem
Series: Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle, spoilers for Infinity.
Pairing: Sakura/Syaoran
Characters: Syaoran (real)
Rating: Teen (13+)
Type: One shot
Summary: She's gone.
Notes: End of the Infinity arc, the night before everyone goes off to Celes.

Comments

[lovely_masoka]

Great Job!

Very well written and wonderful. ♥

I love the last line: She's gone. He thought solemnly, cracking his head against the stone wall behind him, tears appearing at his closed eyelids. And I don't know what to do.

Brings the fic together. ♥

And the way you wrought R!Syaoran was wonderful too.

[lingers]

Thank you very much! ♥ I must admit that my favourite part is probably the last line, two, since as you say, it brings everything together.

Thanks again! <3

[lovely_masoka]

Your very much Welcome ♥

[chiixhideki]

I WAS CRAVING A R!SYAORAN FIC ALL DAY. ♥
Your fics are always so awesome. Thank you. ♥♥

[lingers]

:D GLAD I COULD BE OF SERVICE~~

You're welcome, and thank you very much. ♥!

[autumnflight]

The angel was dead. All that was left was the feather of her heart.

I really love this line. I think it describes Syaoran's feeling of loss very well.

Great work! ^^

[lingers]

Thank you very much!

[laury_kos]

soooooo saD!!
love it ;_;,i love R!syaoran's angst!!T-T
THAnk you!!!!!! :D
great work :3

everyone is chosing a fav. part?? o_o
i will too xDD

-" "Please." His voice was odd, even to him, with some unknown depth of love, far from just wanting to protect her. It's every little thing. It's sweet, it's sorrowful, and... it's of a lover left behind." -

Love it!! Syaoran's feelings where so unfamiliar to him ;_; ,great youput it that way.

[lingers]

You're welcome, and thank you very much! I'm glad I served him well. XD

I'm glad you liked that part. :3 I was cautious over keeping it in, but decided to leave it the way it was. ^^