MY SPOTTTTTTTTTTT OMGGG ((sometimes i still can't ever believe you spot for me amy omg what did i ever do to deserve such goodness in my life ;;;;;;;))
KASJDGHKJGDHAKSGDCLKADGC you rewrote it omg can i salute you for it amy cries I know you worked hard and sweated blood for this aklsjdlkdjsa NOBEL PEACE PRIZE FOR YOU <333
I feel like this version shells out the entire concept better and clearer, with the angel thing and all :DDD good job! hmm i wouldn't know about less happy I feel like the first version was actually much heavier and more dramatic haha but this is just me. BOTH VERSIONS ARE STILL AWESOME. THAT MOMENT WHEN KYUNGSOO STEPPED INTO THE ROOM AND BLINDED JONGIN WITH HIS PURE LIGHT ajkdadkhaskdhk I didn't even know i was holding my breath you know? the first two scenes set the tone of the story so perfectly and we see jongin scraping past the days (lol can time even be counted there?) in desolation and whoosh kyungsoo comes in with his all-glorious angel and shining like a 100 kilowatt light bulb BRIGHTER THAN ANY STAR asjkhakjsdh ok i'll stop creeping you out here cries
the pace here was okay, definitely believable! I like how jongin slowly opens up to kyungsoo bit by bit, i didn't feel it was rushed at all!!! and it's perfect to see it done through dancing and singing ;__;
BUT WHY WOULD AN ANGEL LEAD SOMEONE TO HELL?!?!?!?!?! WHY KYUNGSOO?!?!?!?! CRIES BUT IN THE END HE SAVED JONGIN'S SOUL AND SACRIFICED HIMSELF TO LET JONGIN RETURN TO THE LIVING WORLD CRIES okay i'm going by this theory whenever someone wakes up with amnesia irl yes don't even try to stop me because this explanation is just perfect okay. THIS IS TRUE LOVEEEE~~~~~ I'd like to think soo disappears in the end as well, like he faded away peacefully and the lasts bits of him that never went into jongin's body are scattered around the world and watching jongin and lol i feel like i'm writing fanfiction for this precious story wtf i'm so delu BUT BOTTOM LINE IS, IT'LL BE TOO TORTUROUS TO HAVE KYUNGSOO BANISHED TO HELL. NOPE. NEVER.
crying at the ending. every felt so surreal ;__; ALSO WATER YOU TALKING ABOUT HUH IT IS AN HONOUR TO BE ABLE TO EDIT YOUR FIRST DRAFT I am so grateful okay? <3333 I LOVE YOU AMY HEARTEU FOR YOU FOREVER <333
and please what spamming WE ARE ALL DEPRIVED OF KAISOO EVERY DAY THERE IS NEVER TOO MUCH GOOD FICS AND PICS <333
also for your hard work here dumbsoo to bring you back to life with the effing tree on exoplanet
pEIIIIIII YOU MAKE ME WANT TO CRYYYYYYY BECAUSE OF YOUR COMMENT /holds you forever.
i know what you mean i think the first version was more dramatic because i kind of elaborated less tbh ;; i just wanted to cover the entire story more and leave less confusion which was why i just had to DESTROY THE OLD VERSION WITH A VENGEANCE /sobs/ but it means a lot since i know you read both versions so it's nice to have a second opinion especially when that second opinion is yours \o/
poor kyungsoo i know but love makes you do ca-razy things T_T
I DON'T WANT DUMBSOO /throws him at jongin while sobbing
KASJDGHKJGDHAKSGDCLKADGC you rewrote it omg can i salute you for it amy cries I know you worked hard and sweated blood for this aklsjdlkdjsa NOBEL PEACE PRIZE FOR YOU <333
I feel like this version shells out the entire concept better and clearer, with the angel thing and all :DDD good job! hmm i wouldn't know about less happy I feel like the first version was actually much heavier and more dramatic haha but this is just me. BOTH VERSIONS ARE STILL AWESOME. THAT MOMENT WHEN KYUNGSOO STEPPED INTO THE ROOM AND BLINDED JONGIN WITH HIS PURE LIGHT ajkdadkhaskdhk I didn't even know i was holding my breath you know? the first two scenes set the tone of the story so perfectly and we see jongin scraping past the days (lol can time even be counted there?) in desolation and whoosh kyungsoo comes in with his all-glorious angel and shining like a 100 kilowatt light bulb BRIGHTER THAN ANY STAR asjkhakjsdh ok i'll stop creeping you out here cries
the pace here was okay, definitely believable! I like how jongin slowly opens up to kyungsoo bit by bit, i didn't feel it was rushed at all!!! and it's perfect to see it done through dancing and singing ;__;
BUT WHY WOULD AN ANGEL LEAD SOMEONE TO HELL?!?!?!?!?! WHY KYUNGSOO?!?!?!?! CRIES BUT IN THE END HE SAVED JONGIN'S SOUL AND SACRIFICED HIMSELF TO LET JONGIN RETURN TO THE LIVING WORLD CRIES okay i'm going by this theory whenever someone wakes up with amnesia irl yes don't even try to stop me because this explanation is just perfect okay. THIS IS TRUE LOVEEEE~~~~~ I'd like to think soo disappears in the end as well, like he faded away peacefully and the lasts bits of him that never went into jongin's body are scattered around the world and watching jongin and lol i feel like i'm writing fanfiction for this precious story wtf i'm so delu BUT BOTTOM LINE IS, IT'LL BE TOO TORTUROUS TO HAVE KYUNGSOO BANISHED TO HELL. NOPE. NEVER.
crying at the ending. every felt so surreal ;__; ALSO WATER YOU TALKING ABOUT HUH IT IS AN HONOUR TO BE ABLE TO EDIT YOUR FIRST DRAFT I am so grateful okay? <3333 I LOVE YOU AMY HEARTEU FOR YOU FOREVER <333
and please what spamming WE ARE ALL DEPRIVED OF KAISOO EVERY DAY THERE IS NEVER TOO MUCH GOOD FICS AND PICS <333
also for your hard work here dumbsoo to bring you back to life with the effing tree on exoplanet
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/holds you forever.
i know what you mean i think the first version was more dramatic because i kind of elaborated less tbh ;; i just wanted to cover the entire story more and leave less confusion which was why i just had to DESTROY THE OLD VERSION WITH A VENGEANCE
/sobs/ but it means a lot since i know you read both versions so it's nice to have a second opinion especially when that second opinion is yours \o/
poor kyungsoo i know but love makes you do ca-razy things T_T
I DON'T WANT DUMBSOO /throws him at jongin while sobbing
THANK YOU SO MUCH PEI I LOVE YOUUUUUUU
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