Counting the Cracks (OneShot)

[thisismylastlie]

Title: Counting the Cracks (OneShot)
Pairing: Hyukjae/Donghae. slight!Hyukjae-centric.
Genre: AU. Romance. Angst.
Length: OneShot.
Summary: "A dark world aches for a splash of the sun." / Daily routines are maddening, so Hyukjae sneaks out of his world to see the sun.

Comments

[changdictator]

/blames squid for everything
No but seriously "Nonononononono" I WAS THINKING THE SAME THING URGH. Tears kind of welling behind eyes but this was so so so good forgive me for not reading it earlier, sigh. The sun deal (sorry I don't know my lit terms ;A;) was well executed! Got the point without it being laborious and Donghae and sun just clicks. And Hyukjae. OHMYGOD HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ANYONE.

[thisismylastlie]

lolwhatareyoudoingoverhere At least they died together? /runs away on a unicorn (a.k.a. Lay).
... you're lying about the crying LOL this fic wasn't even sad and I'm starting to doubt if it made sense (well, it did to me, but I wrote it).
But thank you <3

[changdictator]

LMAO YOU CRAY GIRL RIDING ON A UNICORN. How do you write

[thisismylastlie]

It's not sad because it has no emotion LOL
OH MY GOSH AT LEAST THEY'RE TOGETHER LOL ALL BECAUSE I KILLED THEM! I THINK IT'S BETTER THAN THEM ENDING UP WITH SOMEONE ELSE! /slapped.
Everyone dies. /shrugs. Like I said, at least they die together xD

[misael19191919]

I never read angst, or fics when they die but D: gosh. This is beautiful. Beautiful, eunhae world needs more fics like this one, seriously dude, brilliant! I love it!!

[thisismylastlie]

Aww, thank you for giving mine a try then ^^
I'm sorry I didn't warn you I was going to kill them OTL So misleading.
Thank you <3

[fomai]

I'm swimming in my emotional pool!

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!

Can I translate it into Vietnamese? Please ; ;

[thisismylastlie]

Aw, thank you ^^
You may, but I'd like to have the link to it after it's done...? :)