What the hell?: When Characters Take Over

Nov 18, 2005 09:07

My MC's brother, Red, is trying to take over the story. Not only does he have the best storyline, but he is now in love with Danny's girlfriend, Gwinith!



We rushed out the door, me knowing that this was now my time to shine. This was my time to prove to Gwinith how much I loved her, and how much I had loved her for all of these years. I never had any intentions of stealing her away from Danny. In fact, that was the last thing I ever wanted to do. But if the end of the world was near, I knew in my heart that I needed to let her know, and judging from the looks of outside when we left my apartment, it sure looked like the end of the world or maybe the Apocalypse or something very similar. Clouds of smoke hovered over the city, clowns were seen in every direction we turned and bunnies began to follow behind Danny's car as we drove off in search to save my love, Gwinith.

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