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Obligatory HMD post! If you have anything you'd like to say about how I RP this hobo, please feel free to bring it up here. All I ask is for gentleness in your concrit, as this is my first try at RPing a canon version of him anywhere after a long time of not touching the muse at all. OTL

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First of, thanks for commenting! I really appreciate your comments, and I apologize in advance if my responses come off as rushed or anything - been busy and stuff in these few days, so things haven't been ace for me.

First, the trolling thing - actually, I am slowly making Phoenix break away from it. He's really doing this trolling and everything because he's trying to occupy himself and distract from his own mental problems at hand; now though, he has assurances from Edgeworth and from Spirit in a private conversation, so he's better about it now. And now that he is better and has better assurances in regards to him and his newfound magic things, he'll be slowing down the trolling now and concentrating more on what should be more important.

The next bit - yeah I agree with you and I can see where you're coming from. The breaking partnership attempt was really just a random idea on my part, and it isn't something I'm not being too serious on. Its a tendency I have, so don't be too alarmed at those random suggestions when they come. |D; But more importantly, Phoenix just has been in a complete emotional upheaval ever since his return from Michigan, and he's just been trying to put his head back straight. He has managed that for the most part though, so as I've stated above - yeah, he is going to put his energy into properly doing what he feels he needs to do, which is to keep an eye on Edgeworth and ensure that he's fine while he evaluates Death City and Shibusen to see if they're trustworthy.

I admit that I haven't really been concentrating too much on his development since the whole Michigan thing really did a number on him, but for the most part he's better now, and he has re-evaluated himself and what his priorities are. Getting himself to the Agency is the first step for him, yeah - and I'm really not the plotty type to be honest, but hopefully I'll be able to get him to do something eventually.

I'm going to be busy for next month yeah, but I'm always cool with plotting; I'm perfectly cool with the resonance attempt as well, so feel free to get that up whenever and just send me a link via PM/Plurk or whatnot. |D;

And oh haha, I'm hardly offended by the lack of slash at all - I do greatly respect your decision and liking, and to be honest I'm more impressed that you don't follow general fandom thoughts. It's totally cool; I'm not one to really play out slash anyway, and I'll already have my hands full with Date's own relationships anyway. XD Don't worry about it, really - feel free to play it out all you want, I'm supporting it 100%. Besides, it'd be petty of me to hold a grudge just because of something as small as this.

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Haha he just's been through a lot and had a lot more to think about, which was why he was slow about it (and he was procastinating about it, just a bit). But yeah, he's better now so he'll be getting back on track now after getting stuff settled and all that. As for PTSD, I doubt he'll get it proper since he's been having loads of support (and has been exposed to Marie's own wavelength multiple times); he'll need to break out of his own circle to be properly okay, but for the most part he should be fine after having a bit more time to have his head straight.

Yeah, raising my ides when possible seems to be a nice idea - I'll keep that in mind. I'm just not good at taking much action really, since I'd rather not want to step on toes without knowing. But yeah, I'll be sure to do it if I've got something in mind! It'll be a great help for sure.

XD I can understand the feeling; like I said, I'm really totally cool, and I hardly mind at all. I quite like it myself, actually. And yes, of course he'll be teasing him about it when he can help it.

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UM. A running... frilly... thing. IDK. But yes, it'll happen in time - he needs to get over the fact that there's more than just, you know, Edgeworth at stake here. >_> He's having help here and there with it, but he'll get it sooner or later. And he's doing that, yeah, which is partly why he even joined the Agency in the first place.

And yes Mayaaaaa. |D He will be depending on her when the time is ripe.