[Raffles] Ficlet: But My Own

Nov 19, 2009 13:00

Lame title is lame.
1157 words of the post-'Last Laugh' hurt/comfort that mshepley called for.
Is PG-rated slashy.
Thanks to madlovescience for eyeballing it! Any fail is my own.

But My Own )

raffles, fic

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violetjimjams November 19 2009, 19:08:02 UTC
*wails* Faustina is the worst of all the unnecessary female love interests! Don't worry, Bunny, you'll win him back. *clings*

Heart-wrenching. Name your icon, lovely creature.

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thirstyrobot November 20 2009, 23:20:18 UTC
UGH FAUSTINA. I nearly threw my book across the room when I read that story. Arturo, indeed. *gag*
Still, I'm glad for your prompt because it made me sort of deal with it. Therapy, don't you know. :P Thank you, dear!

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storyfan November 19 2009, 19:10:59 UTC
This is a terrific little fic. I think you've captured Bunny's drama queen demeanor (at least that's how I see him sometimes) as well as his unswerving loyalty and faith in Raffles.

And I loved the ending. Raffles knows the name of his one true love.

Are you cross-posting to Crimeandcricket? I did with my drabble and got some sweet and helpful comments.

Edited to use the correct icon.

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thirstyrobot November 20 2009, 23:23:17 UTC
:D Thank you, my dear. Heh, drama queen Bunny. Hells yeah, Raffles knows what he wants. He's just a bit damaged and needs some Bunnyloving to set him right. *g*

I did mean to post it, but hadn't had time. Shall do so in a bit here.

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laughinggas13 November 22 2009, 20:10:32 UTC
Sorry to butt in, but crimeandcricket? Would that be a Raffles comm? Because if so, YAY! I've been looking for one for ages.

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storyfan November 22 2009, 20:18:34 UTC

hazeltea November 19 2009, 19:34:45 UTC
Bunny holds all of this back way too politely in canon for my tastes. Thank you for putting it out there! Wonderful.

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thirstyrobot November 20 2009, 23:27:46 UTC
Poor polite Bunny. He's such a good egg. I think I needed the venting as much as he did. Thank you! :D

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janeturenne November 19 2009, 21:52:51 UTC
Oh, oh, oh, this is gorgeous. Sad and sweet and honest--which is one of the hardest things to write--and just overall as lovely as can be. Beautiful beautiful beautiful, Mercy darling.

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thirstyrobot November 20 2009, 23:30:29 UTC
*sings* Sweet sweet Jane!

You are most excellent. I guess the honesty came from my sort of using this as a vehicle to process the rather disgruntling bit of canon, and stabbing at new characters always makes me need to get into somebody's head. ♥ Thank you, lovely!

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emeraldreeve November 20 2009, 05:08:54 UTC
Wonderful and very sad! I hope you write more of these two!

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thirstyrobot November 20 2009, 23:31:27 UTC
Thank you! And yep, I will be writing more of them, especially now that I've got my feet wet.

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