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[thinkatory]

For: midhenaer
Prompt: The last time Roger sees April before she commits suicide.
Title: Inflexibility
Word Count: 622.
Rating: PG-13, for language.
Note: I couldn't get the idea of this April out of my head, so I had to write it like this. Angst, as requested. Sorry for the influx of RENTfic, but it was requested!

Comments

[dramaturgy]

You love me. <33333333333 I love it.

[renegadelufin]

I haven't seen RENT, so when I read your fics I'm never sure whether any of it actually happened in the play or not. I'm sure that if I ever get dragged to see the thing, what I expect of it will be vastly different from the reality.

I still read 'em whenever I see 'em, though.

[misswritten]

That was really good! I loved it.

[alexhuntley]

Beautiful. I love this April.

[kay_cricketed]

Oh my god, this is just... heartbreaking and dreamlike, and I admit to a huge Roger/April weakness. I love it. Eeek.

She has this ability to put herself on display with every move she makes - like now, dangling the bottle from her fingertips, a hand on her thin hip, the toss of her thick hair - so, he can believe that.

Ooooh. That is an excellent, well-written paragraph. The image just snaps into your mind like a puzzle piece.

He is reminded of the first time he saw her, dancing, the human form of the music inside of him that has been aching to escape since the moment he picked up a guitar. Then, she falls.

Oh my gosh, I love that. The human form of music inside of him... just... ungh. Brilliant.

And the ending. Waaaaah. *clings to them* ♥ ♥