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Maybe I Need You | Andrea Gibson
Apr 22, 2009 21:59
The winter I told you I think icicles are magic (
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shechoselove
April 23 2009, 03:38:25 UTC
So many clichés...
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fullofsparks
April 23 2009, 03:41:54 UTC
Ditto. There's a lot of it I like, but then...
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shechoselove
April 23 2009, 03:46:03 UTC
I agree. I wanted to badly to like this poem, too. It seems she made a conscious effort to freshen up some potential clichés -- but certainly not all.
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shechoselove
April 23 2009, 03:50:16 UTC
*so badly
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memorywillrust
April 23 2009, 15:59:30 UTC
agreed. it made it a lot more trite.
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mspixieears
April 30 2009, 20:55:45 UTC
Yeah, I well agree. It has promise in some parts, but in others I can't help but think "sigh, 'cause this has never been done or said". < /sarcasm >
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