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Love, by Lola Haskins
Nov 06, 2007 08:36
She tries it on, like a dress.
She decides it doesn't fit,
and starts to take it off.
Her skin comes, too.
lola haskins
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lovebreaksheart
November 6 2007, 15:23:48 UTC
this is heartbreaking.
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flightviolation
November 6 2007, 15:27:47 UTC
when i first read it i cringed. it was physically felt.
i like how it is so small & potent.
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softanimal
November 6 2007, 15:49:36 UTC
ouch. perfect.
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longtime_lurker
November 6 2007, 17:11:40 UTC
...oh.
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deer_bones
November 6 2007, 19:16:42 UTC
i love short poems with punches. perfect post!
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iatrogenicmyth
November 6 2007, 23:51:05 UTC
damn.
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