Two Roads Diverged : Chapter 10

[icedteainthebag]

Title: Two Roads Diverged (10/10)
Author: icedteainthebag
Word Count: 34,420
Rating: MA
Pairings: Ellen Tigh/Saul Tigh, Laura Roslin/Bill Adama
Warnings: Character death
Summary: Sometimes we make mistakes when we think we're doing the right thing.
Notes: See Chapter One. Everybody frakkin’ rocks. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Artist: MrsDrJackson
Link to Art: banner

Comments

[samcasey]

Oh this was just so perfect.

Laura thinking about going to talk with Ellen and that they would get along when they made it off that rock and being optimistic and then thier last moment together. Oh that was just so heartbreaking knowing what was about to happen.

I love that all Ellen cared about was that Saul realized how much she loved him <3

I hadnt acctually thought about it before but It makes perfect sense that Laura wouldnt know about Ellens death before they left the planet... I love her reaction, you showed that they really did connect.

I love thier reunion is perfect... I love how she had memorized details of thier love maiking and repeated them to herself <3 I love how she still doesnt want him to see that she was hurt... and how he reverently makes love to her and goes over her bruises just a little more than everywhere else but he doesnt say anything <3

Towards the end of the story(i.e. ch 8&9) I was thinking that I realllly wanted you to have written in their reunion too but I was sitting here like oh God I dont know how she is going to fit all of it in! But you did and you did it sooooo beautifully and amazingly perfect!

I love that you added Ellen waking up very nice way to wrap it up.

[samcasey]

Oh and I added this comm to my flist so I can come back to read this masterpiece!