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smithy161 in thewordsmithery

Fic: Lie

Nov 13, 2007 14:10

A short, sad Jack/Five drabble.

Title: Lie
Rating: R, maybe PG13
Summary: Jack wants the Doctor to lie to him
Pairing: Jack/Five
Length 100 words
Table: here

( Lie )

doctor who 100, five/jack

Comments 20

fandom_me November 13 2007, 14:23:16 UTC

That. Just disturbed the hell out of me.

And I like it.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 14:26:49 UTC

Sorry! Actually, I can't quite see Five really doing that (although he does pander to people at times), but it's one of those ideas that bit and wouldn't let go.

Glad you liked it despite the disturbingness!

fandom_me November 13 2007, 21:48:22 UTC

I had to go back and see which Doctor it was. I can't quite see Five doing it, either, but. But. It worked here.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 22:04:30 UTC

That's good! The next one of these really has to have a more convincing Five. Any excuse to sit around watching him for inspiration...

seize November 13 2007, 15:11:25 UTC

Beautiful. Takes the breath away, and so gently.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 21:57:11 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

chatona November 13 2007, 15:11:59 UTC

*whimpers*

Me is broken.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 21:57:43 UTC

Eep! *Fixes*

chatona November 13 2007, 22:05:10 UTC

Thanks for fixing me!

unfeathered November 13 2007, 16:03:53 UTC

Awwww. Poor Jack!

Gentle sex and gentle lies.

He knows it isn’t, exactly, his body Jack is touching, or his voice Jack hears. - this line is beautiful.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 22:00:03 UTC

Thank you! And yeah, I really, really must write something less cruel to Jack.

_medley_ November 13 2007, 17:04:03 UTC

::flails:: I think that just knocked the breath out of me. Oh, Jack doesn't begin to cover that. That hurts.

smithy161 November 13 2007, 22:00:55 UTC

Sorry! And yeah... next fic? Happy Jack. I swear.

Thanks for reading!

_medley_ November 13 2007, 22:08:06 UTC

Don't apologize! It's a good kind of OW. *g*

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