Fic: Control

[smithy161]

Title: Control (prompt #88)
Rating: R
Pairing: Five/Jack
Summary: Jack is a man who is used to having control. There is only one person who can take it from him.
Length: 300 words
Table: here

Comments

[donutsweeper]

People follow him, people listen to him, people obey him. They don’t ask why. They simply do.

oooh, perfect description of Jack!!! And great drabble!

[smithy161]

Thank you!

And I think that Jack being a strong, leader-type is really why I ship him with the Doctor. If Jack didn't have a certain charismatic power of his own, it would be a very one-sided relationship.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

[unfeathered]

And I think that Jack being a strong, leader-type is really why I ship him with the Doctor. If Jack didn't have a certain charismatic power of his own, it would be a very one-sided relationship.

Absolutely. Jack and the Doctor are, if not equals, then about the nearest thing each of them can get to one. That's what makes them so fascinating together, and work so well together.

I love this fic so much. The style - the echoing of "This is" at the start of each paragraph - is great.

And I always adore Jack on his knees to the Doctor. Very, very hot.

[veta_black]

@___@ *explosion leading to feathers dropping down slowly*

[veta_black]

(In a good way)

[smithy161]

Things exploding in a good way = fabby. Thanks for reading!

[veta_black]

Thanks for writing! I always squee when I see you've updated.

[dagnirovanaliel]

Wow.

Very powerful and hot.

[smithy161]

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

[adafrog]

Oh, well done.

[smithy161]

Thank you!

[order_of_chaos]

Yesssssssssssssss.
I like it.

[smithy161]

Awesome, thanks!