Seize the Day - NaNoWriMo Attempt - Chapter 18

Nov 29, 2013 06:09

Now that I've officially won NaNo, I want to change gears and write something else, for a bit. Only one problem -- I don't know what to write! So here, enjoy this chapter of Seize the Day while I wrack my brain for ideas. xD
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character: mitchel, original fiction, trigger: language, the tomorrow trilogy, rating: r, pairing: jazz/savin, character: jazz, character: casio, novel: seize the day

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alien_writings November 29 2013, 14:59:27 UTC
Oh Mitchel, you really are so...Mitchel-y. Of course Mitchel would talk about how Savin's just a rebound who only wanted sex. I was amused when Jazz said HE had approached Savin for sex first.

When Jazz was like "is there anything new I need to know?" I kind of wanted to shout "Mitchel is part of the Resistance!" lol. Shouting at fictional characters has limited effectiveness, though.

How serious are the threats of a marriage to Laquesha Smith? And when Jazz said his dad was in excellent health so he didn't have to worry about heirs yet, I couldn't help thinking about the addiction subplot -- psychosomatic pain in the service of getting painkillers and being addicted to said painkillers isn't "excellent health," is it?

Oh, I have things I'd like to see if you'd like some suggestions -- I don't know if this would be possible with the current state of Cliffton canon, but I'd love to see more of your Wes/Brendan fic because OMG those meme answers were SO ADORABLE. If you can't do that, I'd totally love to see the "Mitchel meets Savin's parents" fic because that'd just be hilarious.

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theun4givables November 29 2013, 15:37:37 UTC
Of course he would talk about how Savin's just a rebound. That's just how Mitchel rolls.

lololol not really effective, no.

You'll have to see. ;) And yeah, Jazz doesn't realize his father's condition is actually kinda bad. Not yet.

I actually ended up starting a thing for writerverse's amnesty challenge, for the Crossroads Challenge. It involves Jazz and Ravi. (because I apparently want to write book 2 or 3 rn)

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