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Seize the Day - NaNoWriMo Attempt - Chapter 13

Nov 22, 2013 12:37

Hit 40k today. I don't think I'll be writing much more, and I have like.. 3 more chapters to post. I'll post a second one later today, and another two tomorrow. I'd rather not flood my flist. :)
Previous Chapters:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 12The next week passed Savin by quickly. The background check, fingerprinting and ( Read more... )

character: mitchel, original fiction, trigger: language, the tomorrow trilogy, character: savin, rating: r, pairing: jazz/savin, character: jazz, character: casio, novel: seize the day

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alien_writings November 22 2013, 19:15:28 UTC

Lolol the offer to let Savin and his father live together at the Palace. Just...lolol. That amused me, knowing how fabulously Savin gets along with Hajime.

Sexy interlude was sexy, and I was also amused by Jazz's being all "he's my boyfriend" to Mitchel. I wonder what trouble Mitchel's going to make for them knowing that.

theun4givables November 22 2013, 19:29:22 UTC

Yeah, I laughed when I heard that line, too. Because Savin's internal reaction in my head was Oh FUCK no, Devin-y voice sounding and all. It was glorious.

Hah, this isn't the true sexy interlude. I faded them to black, didn't I? ;) The real one is the whole shebang, and it's chapter 16. xD And yes, Mitchel's going to cause trouble. I just don't quite know how much, yet.