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Seize the Day - NaNoWriMo Attempt - Chapter 9

Nov 13, 2013 11:34

I've pulled ahead a little bit. Kept the kiddo home today from preschool; he was awake most of the time between 2:30a-6a this morning. Considering 2:30a is "sleeping in" for me...yeah. I did get some writing done (3k's worth), but I wanted to have another 5k day. Oh well...
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original fiction, character: mari, trigger: language, the tomorrow trilogy, character: savin, rating: r, character: jazz, novel: seize the day

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alien_writings November 13 2013, 23:10:35 UTC

Savin's sure floating on clouds made of "I just got some action," isn't he? Hah, if Jazz shows up at the hospital again, I wonder if he and Savin will actually be able to keep it in their pants. They don't have the best track recording with keeping their pants on. Even if Savin is older now, I don't think his age will slow him down all that much!

Oops with Savin forgetting the patient whose chart Mari showed him needed a new freaking liver!

I agree with Alexandra that Jazz should be careful around Mitchel. Everyone should be careful around Mitchel.

I hope Jazz's diplomatic meeting goes okay, but I have a (possibly irrational) feeling something will go wrong. Then again, it's your world, so I'm always anticipating drama and disaster by default, lol.

theun4givables November 14 2013, 17:36:55 UTC

I think they might be able to. Maybe. This IS J&S we're talking about. And Savin honestly isn't older than he was in the most recent previous version.

It's not so much that he forgot the patient, it's that he overlooked certain markers in their chart. xD

And yet, no one is careful around Mitchel. *sigh*

It might go reasonably well -- for my 'verse, anyway. We'll have to see. :)