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Seize the Day - NaNoWriMo Attempt - Chapter 6

Nov 08, 2013 12:19

I'm ahead now on the NaNoWriMo goals, but I'm sure the next few days (I work the next 3 at least, in a row) are going to have low word counts. Wish me luck?
Previous Chapters:
1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5Jazz sighed, throwing his head back against the back seat of the car. He loosened his tie, tugging the knot away from his neck as he closed his eyes. The ( Read more... )

original fiction, character: mari, trigger: language, novel: seize the day, rating: r, character: jazz

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alien_writings November 9 2013, 18:33:58 UTC

I liked the sequence between Jazz and Mitchel where Mitchel lampshades the coincidental nature of Savin being the surgeon who worked on Jazz's dad. Mitchel also has a point about the unlikeliness of a relationship between Jazz and Savin, so I'm curious how they will actually make a relationship happen.

theun4givables November 10 2013, 20:59:30 UTC

Yeah, Mitchel had to lampshade it. I also think he was vaguely implying that Jazz was lying -- that Jazz was just borrowing another name he heard in order to make it sound like he HAD slept with another guy. Oh, Mitchel.

They find a way. I'm not sure how yet, but they fucking find a way. It's Jazz and Savin, y'know? lol