Cliffton Fanfiction - Just as Human, Chapter 1

Jul 07, 2013 13:49

This totally was intended to be a one-shot, and then plot bunnies ate my brain and I just knew I was going to want to expand it later on. I apparently don't wanna write canon anymore, lol. Anyway, this is a Calla/Devin fic. This is a fill for hc_bingo's "robots/androids." And yes, this part has sexual content. ;) EnjoyyyyDon’t know what time it is when I ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, trigger: rape, not safe for work, character: calla, pov: devin, trigger: language, character: devin, pairing: calla/devin, h/c bingo, fandom: cliffton, fanfiction

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n3m3sis43 July 7 2013, 18:59:14 UTC
Those damn plot bunnies! Devin can't ever make anything easy for anyone who writes him, can he?

Also, my bbbbbssss. <3

Devin's line about Calla having a brain "unlike some of the people living in this house" gets me every time. Also, his feelings about how she looks in the picture are dead-on. He knows enough about Harvest Ball or at least their culture overall to know why she looks scared.

Devin totally spacing out while staring at Calla? Perfect. Him then telling her to come upstairs because he has something to show her? Omfgggggg, dying. Could he possibly be any (unintentionally) creepier? I love it.

You did a great job capturing how I think Devin canonly feels about Calla at this point in the timeline (if I ever manage to rewrite it), minus the sexual parts (which are, sadly, going to have to continue living only in subtext and my headcanon). :)

And damn, Calla. That was a mean as hell prank to pull (not that I don't think she has it in her). How did she not know that was going to lead to emo!tearz? (Answer: because she still half-expects Devin to act like other dudes she's known back home.)

As far as the rest goes, unffff (until it isn't) and then 'dawwww. My bbbbbs. I love it. <3

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theun4givables July 7 2013, 20:37:25 UTC
He can't. He really can't.

Thanks. :) I was hoping he knew enough to have that reaction to her picture.

xD I love it when he's unintentionally creepy. It's why I did that. Also, he'd totally space that way, anyway. ;)

Yessssss, I'm glad for that. xD I know the sexual parts aren't canon at all, but it's more fun this wayyyy. xD

I think she only pulled it because he was so concerned about the possibility of it not working and them losing her forever. I think she maybe kinda expected the emo!tears. Maybe. That was still a mean trick and I love it. xD

:D :D :D Yayyyyy.

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