[Advent] Day 18

[thesockmonster]

For: fuyuko_6
Rating: NC17
Pairing: Jongin/Yifan
Length: 2.3k
Summary: Jongin wants to have a baby - a side story from Trial and Error.

Comments

[fuyuko_6]

Trial and Error is one of my favourite fanfics. I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS WORLD YOU'VE CREATED!!!!

This side story was much better than the one I had in my mind since I read Trial and Error.

One of my favourite things about Trial and Error was that they would lie all over each other. It was so lovely seeing that again.

SEHUUUUUN!! I want to hold him so much. What an adorable person. I love the relationships the omegas have with each other. They're so comforting and warm and such a strong support for each other. It really makes me so happy when they're being clingy. I want someone to hold me now, or I want to hold someone else, either one is fine. I want to hold YOU for writing such a beautiful story.

Ok, quote and spazz time!!!!

"The rumbling of Yifan’s voice is comforting along Jongin’s back, but he’s not listening to the words. They’re not meant for him. Yifan is talking to Kyungsoo, one of the alphas who has begun to rise in the ranks of the hunters. He comes around often now, sometimes because the other hunters are too rowdy for his taste, and sometimes because he’s wanting to glean information about one of their newer pack members from Yifan."

Bunny...nooooo, you can't do this to me. Sobbing. You're bringing in a new side story that is making me so greedy for more. *screams into a pillow*

"When he gets to Jongin, he lowers to his knees and gingerly lays himself on Jongin’s lap. Jongin shifts to accommodate him and Yifan shifts around Jongin."

I will never ever ever get over these interactions. They just make life look so simple and carefree and easy and all I want is to live with them.

I mean, look at this...

"Jongin stares down at him, down at where Yifan’s thumb is soothing over the skin of his belly. Something twists in Jongin’s chest."

Why can't we all live like this?

This was my favourite line in the story...

'"Jongin,” Sehun whines, looking up at Jongin through the hair that’s fallen in his eyes, “have this baby for me.”'

I chuckled so much, and then Jongin chuckled, and it was just too cute.

"“You love being pregnant,” Jongin tells him, even as he bends low to push his nose to Sehun’s belly. He’s not nearly as large as he’s going to be yet, and he carries it well. Sehun whines softly, knowing that Jongin speaks the truth."

Oh my gosh, Sehun can you stop being so damn adorable?? And also, wow, Xiuhunhan. *squeals*

"Jongin wants to give Yifan a child; it doesn’t matter which of them carries it."

This was such an important line for me. I really appreciate it when authors remind people that there is no gender role in same sex relationships. So thank you so much for bringing in this tiny line that has a such a huge impact.

"So many omegas are pregnant now, Sehun and Baekhyun being among the first."

AAAAAAAWWW Baekhyun! *sobs* and he's going to have twins. I'm so excited for him. This beautiful omega deserves all the happiness in the world. I love him so much.

"He’s secretly gone to Yixing and the council, asking them if it’s even possible that they could have a child. Their answers hadn’t been helpful. Two omegas claiming each other is nearly unheard of; there’s so little known about them that it had left a bad taste in Jongin’s mouth. He just wants to know if all of this hope is for nothing."

[fuyuko_6]

continued...

Aaaaw baby!! Come here please, let me hold you and pat you. You're so precious. Bunny, this just reminds me of how he confessed to someone about his feelings for Yifan, which was the reason why I really wanted to read their side story. It was the way he said it that just made my heart melt.

"He’d snuck away when he felt a little dizzy, wandering over to where Sehun is resting on a pile of furs with Lu Han propping him up. It’s not often that Sehun indulges in pampering Jongin, but it’s been known to happen on the occasion. He combs his fingers softly through Jongin’s hair as Jongin leans against him. Lu Han had moved his arm so Sehun could drag Jongin closer, but his other arm is still protectively wrapped around Sehun’s belly."

How can anyone not want to pamper Jongin? He's so pamper worthy. He deserves to be pampered, touched and caressed 24/7. And I love Alpha Luhan being all protective over his mate.

'“Are you feeling alright?” Joonmyun queries when Jongin hooks his chin on Joonmyun’s shoulder and slumps against him. Jongin hums in response, eyes closing to steady himself. He just can’t shake this weird wobbliness. Maybe he should have napped with Sehun earlier. Joonmyun doesn’t push Jongin away, letting Jongin use him as a prop until Yifan finds them a while later.'

Oh, my gosh Jongin, you're probably pregnant, please sit down. *sorry* This was how I was spazzing and commenting as I read. haha. And just me getting all excited for Jongin and the 80% chance that he's going to have a little Yingin.

'“I’ve no more patience for being a messenger boy,” Yifan tells him. “Kyungsoo and Zitao can talk with each other face-to-face or not at all,” he finishes with a huff.'

*note to self* NOPE NOPE NOPE!! Don't think about it, Larry. If you don't think about it, it will go away and you won't imagine Taosoo getting together. You definitely will not imagine them bickering and then kissing each other passionately against the elder tree near the river. So just...NO!!!

"Tonight though, tonight it’s Jongin who is feeling soft and needy, sighing contently as Yifan’s kisses trail down his neck."

I didn't want to copy the whole love making scene, but I squealed all the way because there was just so much love and emotions, and this scene made me so happy.

"Jongin lays on the edge of the river bank, blinking the sky into focus as Joonmyun’s worried hands cup his face."

I'm a sucker for angst and this tiny dash of it was just what I needed this morning. Jongin, please be careful. I know you don't know yet, but I'm like 90% sure now that you're pregnant!

"He doesn’t feel that desire to curve away from Chanyeol’s touch when the alpha scoops Jongin off the ground and carries him back to camp."

OH MY GOSH!! I've had this angsty fic in my head for a few weeks now (that will never be written, of course), where Jongin faints and Chanyeol picks him up and takes him into a house. So this scene just made me squeal so much. Thaaaaaaaaaaaank you!!!!!

'“Sorry,” Jongin whispers, reaching out to curl his arm around Yifan’s waist. He pushes his nose to Yifan’s neck, breathing him in.

“You’re going to have to be more careful,” Yifan tells him. “I’ll take care of you.”'

CAN YOU TWO STOP DON'T STOP BEING SUCH A PERFECT COUPLE???????!!!!!!!! Oh my gosh, you're killing me!!!

'"Tears sting in Jongin’s eyes - happy tears - and he sobs as Yifan gathers him in his arms again. “We’re going to have a baby,” Jongin cries.

“We are,” Yifan tells him, the emotion thick in his voice. “We are.”'

YAY!!! I'm now 100% sure that you're going to have a baby, Jongin!!

[fuyuko_6]

Continued...

Bunny, thank you so much for taking time to write this. I know you're busy and that you have so many stories swimming around in your head, but really, thank you so much for writing something from this wonderful world you've created.
When I saw the notification on my phone this morning, I was so happy. I've been reading your work since 2013 and I never thought I'd be able receive a fic from you someday. So today is just so special for me. You are truly one of my favourite writers.

And also, thank you for doing your advent project and writing for so many people. I know there are days when authors get frustrated about many things regarding ficdom, but just know that there are people who support you and other authors. We appreciate you all so much. There are days when life just seems to fall apart and just reading something from one of our favourite ff authors can really make someone feel good, even the 1k lunchtime fics. hehe. I haven't been reading much lately, but whatever time I have to spare to really engage with a story wholeheartedly is especially reserved for the authors that I keep near and dear to my heart.

Thank you so much for this:)