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[Fic] Eye Of The Storm

Apr 12, 2015 12:43

Title: Eye Of The Storm
Pairing: Sehun/Luhan
Rating:PG-13
Length: 3100w
Author's Note: A companion/sequel to Dragontouched. It probably won't make much sense unless you've read it first. Also, thank you Adele for making this readable. ^_^
Summary: The new recruits are going to get Sehun killed.

( Sehun had been a spoiled, arrogant boy of fifteen when he’d met Luhan, the standoffish dragon who took offense at being bound to one so young. )

pairing: sehun/luhan, length: short, group: exo, rating: pg-13

Comments 11

rjaejoo April 12 2015, 17:32:45 UTC

Happy for this companion piece, thanks for writing and sharing!

teatimetaemint April 12 2015, 20:55:49 UTC

Bunny.

BUNNY.

I don't think you'll ever realize how tempting it is to just scream and coo and flail at you. I'd totally do it, but I love this story so much, I just know it needs a proper comment. So I won't just scream at how wonderfully written this is, I won't just coo at their interaction or flail at the tenderness between them.
I'll be a good reader and try to put my utter adoration and amazement into words. (Don't expect too much. I'm emotional as hell.)

This.
THIS.
It's all I've ever wanted and it's absolutely glorious and I'm so emotional and happy and something right now. This entire universe just has me in a state of bliss and I just absolutely love what you did/what you're doing with it. When you told me you were planning on writing a Selu side-story/sequel for Dragontouched I basically exploded with excitement and happiness and this is even better than anything I imagined. Their bond is just so palpable and beautiful (maybe because it's so obvious how hard-earned it is, how much they had to fight each other and ( ... )

anya_azrael April 15 2015, 07:02:06 UTC

I mean, i basically wanted to say all of this but you summed it up???

whelp

inky_starlight April 12 2015, 22:21:23 UTC

I looove this au to bits! Great job, as always!

mutantbic April 13 2015, 00:10:18 UTC

/screaming/
BUNNY!!! omg why do you do this to me? I'm so offended that I demand more from this AU. hehe (are there any other pairs? *greedy me... sorry*)

I should have known when you crossposted the first story to AFF. OMG. /sharpens pencil, cracks neck and knuckles and resolves to work harder/

mutantbic April 13 2015, 00:12:45 UTC

Also, I'm sorry about how short my comment is but i'm still emotional from all this SHIRTLESS SUHO business and I'll need to gather my thoughts and share them when I come back to read this again...

(His shoulders Bunny... his sho ul ders...)

fuyuko_6 April 13 2015, 02:43:01 UTC

Bunny!!!

This is so beautiful! The images! Oh goodness, that water scene was just so amazing. I'm at a loss for words really. I think you have the beginnings of an amazing series. I'm really hoping it is your plan. I'm sorry if I seem demanding as a fan. It's just too lovely to not want more. And also, what an awesome action scene. It was so well written and really exciting.

Sehun used to pull away, but Luhan always tells Sehun he’s the living, breathing embodiment of their life together and the scars are simply the path they’ve taken.

This is my favourite line in this fic.