Rules Of Fighting (2/4)

Feb 14, 2010 17:00

Title: Rules Of Fighting (2/4)
Author: thesingingbush
Genre: Iron Man/Sherlock Holmes crossover
Characters/Pairings: Stark/Holmes, hinted/mentions of Stark/Watson & Holmes/Watson
Rating: R-- (not very good with the rating thing, so I'm just going to be safe)
Word Count: 4,780 (for this section)
Spoilers: If you've never seen Iron Man or read the comics, or ( Read more... )

stark/holmes, author: thesingingbush, rules of fighting series

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luxofthelawliet February 15 2010, 04:44:32 UTC
Okay, first off, I reviewed the first chapter gushing about how I desperately wanted one of these fics.

Now I'm gushing about the COMPLETE WIN AND AWESOME OF THIS CHAPTER AND ALSO WILL YOU MARRY ME, IT'S VALENTINE'S DAY.

This was sexy. Guh. I need a word for this, but I cannot think of one. So I'm just going to tell you my favorite lines.

It'll be like talking dirty with a blonde virgin who brings a bubble wand for a 'Blow Job'.

OMG. I LOL'D SO HARD. (Moar capsraping you! XD) I actually had to say this out loud in an impression of Tony Stark and I think it was fantastic. Holy God.

As he watched this swift movement Tony let out a breathy "Fuuuck mee..."

Damn.

The man was flexible.
Fit, and flexible. A regular contortionist.
Tony thought he heard his mating call.

Okay, I was squealing at this. That's so IC, and so frakking hot.

"Do you know what a cheeseburger is?"
"No."
"I rest my case."

I died laughing at this part.

Okay, now I LOVED this whole chapter and I do hope you update in the near future? ESPECIALLY THE END. I QUITE ENJOYED THE END.

... Done gushing <3

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thesingingbush February 17 2010, 22:37:45 UTC
OMG I LOVE YOUR COMMENT 8DDDDD!!!!!!!!!! It's the best!

Sorry I respond several days late :( But yes, I would totally marry you! XD!!

o///o you really liked it? Gee, thank you so much!! I think I'm rubbish so this makes me feel better♥

The first quote you liked about the blonde virgin made me cringe when I typed it ;/ I tried so hard to make it really funny and I thought I still failed. Glad to know someone thought it tickled their funny bone :)

XD Thank you so much!! I thought he'd say that.

OMG, when the cheeseburger line popped randomly in my head I laughed so hard to myself I couldn't breathe. I scared the cat XDXDXD

*giggles* Yeah the end! I really didn't intend on it quite like that (alot less sexual, actually) but yeah. There ya go! I'm going to try and work on it as much as possible, I promise. Hopefully you'll like the rest of it.

Thank you again for commenting!!! ^w^

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