Peeve

Apr 25, 2008 10:24

Song of the day:  "Breaking up" - Rilo Kiley

The one thing that gets me about this song (in addition to the bridge, which annoys me rhythmically and melodically) is the grammatical incorrectness of  the line "trouble between you and I" in the 1st chorus.  I'll give the lyricist the benefit of the (creative license) doubt and assume it was written to rhyme more closely to the lines in subsequent choruses.   But c'mon, that's a cop-out.

I swear, otherwise I think it's a good song. :-)
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