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theshiva

Fic: Wanderers and Deities (4/7) - Jupiter

Jul 14, 2009 12:57

Title: Wanderers and Deities
Chapter: Jupiter, the Bringer of Jollity
Genre: Gen
Rating: PG-13
Note: See the master post for author's notes.

Jupiter is perhaps the most famous movement from the symphony, and probably the one that most of you will recognize. One of its main directions is andante maestoso, which hints at its majestic undertones.

( Jupiter, the Bringer of Jollity )

Comments 5

blcwriter July 16 2009, 03:00:44 UTC

By Jove, that's good. Especially because Scotty is the sad clown. Excellent.

revengent July 16 2009, 04:13:39 UTC

OMG I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING ABOUT THE PLANETS !!!

ultra_maniac July 16 2009, 05:10:57 UTC

Okay, your Kirk story was brilliantly done, your Chekov part was painted beautifully (especially with the end scene with Uhura); The Sulu chapter made me smiled because of it's warm feelings that developed in me but, by far, this chapter takes top honors! (This is stated before I finish the other parts though...)

I love Scotty in the new universe and there just doesn't seem to be enough fanfics of him portrayed as an honest, quirky, lovable human being. His sort of down on himself attitude is stirring and played up nicely; But I think it's the way you broke his defenses by use of the dog was so incredibly done that I can't properly give you enough praise for.

I love this piece (and the collection so far) because of the characters as you write them. Nice job and I can't wait to finish the rest of the story~

cedarrapidsgirl July 16 2009, 13:55:17 UTC

Yay! I love this! I will admit I don't know too much about Holst's other planet ventures, as I played Jupiter in HS band, and I have it on my ipod, and can probably sing it by heart. I love Scotty as well, and he fits well with this song. Kudos!

melisus July 18 2009, 02:44:39 UTC

I don't see a lot of fic about Scotty, at least fic that actually explores his character. So this is very refreshing! This was great music to set his character against; it really fits him well and helps emphasize the offbeat nature of Scotty. He's up, he's down, and always it seems just loveable (kind of like the dog).