Comments | theshinjukucroc: 5 Whip Lashes

theshinjukucroc

Nov 19, 2011 02:32

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triessence November 19 2011, 07:38:01 UTC

The plot was decent, but your story telling could use work.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 07:39:14 UTC

It's been awhile since I last had to write one.

triessence November 19 2011, 07:40:52 UTC

I wouldn't have thought you ever had it in you to write, with that skull of yours so full of shit.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 07:49:16 UTC

It takes a head full of shit to recognize another.

triessence November 19 2011, 07:50:38 UTC

Or someone with brains to realize how full of shit the other is.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 07:53:29 UTC

When you find someone like that, let me know.

triessence November 19 2011, 09:15:28 UTC

When you get the brains to know who it is, let me know.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 21:31:48 UTC

Hey, brat. You're the one following an idiot.

triessence November 19 2011, 23:03:02 UTC

Better than following you.

theshinjukucroc November 19 2011, 23:32:37 UTC

You never got your ass kicked when you were following me.

triessence November 19 2011, 23:34:23 UTC

Because I could never find a challenge, when following you.

theshinjukucroc November 20 2011, 01:16:03 UTC

So?

triessence November 20 2011, 01:21:19 UTC

I wasn't fighting for what I wanted. Even if I get scratched up fighting with Kogarasumaru, it's worth it.

theshinjukucroc November 20 2011, 01:23:33 UTC

You sound like Akito.

triessence November 20 2011, 01:31:44 UTC

We both fight for the same thing. Or, close enough.

theshinjukucroc November 20 2011, 01:32:41 UTC

You fight to get in the Storm King's pants too?

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