[multichapter] baby blue part 3 chapter 18

[thesecretdoor]

Title: Baby Blue: Part 3: Chapter 18
Pairing: JunDa
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1103
Disclaimer: All people mentioned belong only to themselves...aside from JunDa who clearly belong to each other.
Summary: In the fairy tales they fall in love and live happily ever after...but this isn't a fairy tale. How are two people, madly in love, supposed to stay

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SPOT!

[kissmegreen]

...and surprise surprise for an 'early' update :-)

okay, I'm back faster than expected.

and I don't know what to think. That was quite.... 'lustful'.

I mean, the scene was.... hot? but also embarrassing and wrong and Ueda crying can never be a good thing. could it be because they were caught or that he finally realised what had just happened and wants to beat himself for giving in? I can't help but feel he'll even reject Junno some more~

*sighs*

and then Maru staying behind... I can only assume it's to give Junno a piece of his mind or a punch to his face.

He's really a good best friend... but wait! did Junno just leave Ueda to fend for himself, while he goes away to the bathroom to clean up? I swear he had gone to fetch tissue for them both but he never returned while Maru found tissue around... did they not see it? or was it he awkwardness of the situation that it never occurred to them?

But then Junno seemed calmed enough to have given Ueda a final kiss... and while I think a kiss on the forehead is quite a tender act, everything just get muddied by leaving Tatsuya by himself standing there... I mean he should have known/guested the tight and more embarrassing spot Ueda was in.

Oh why is Junno turning out to be like this!?! so conflicted... one minute seemingly heartless, very selfish, then the next he's all mushy! and what is he still doing in the bathroom?! I hope he's just as confused and feeling like hell.

Re: SPOT!

[thesecretdoor]

It certainly was awkward right? I guess after months of barely talking, doing something like that isn't exactly natural, but it kind of speaks something about their deep feelings, that they still can't resist each other, I hope?

I think it's maybe a little of both why Ueda was upset about it, that he'd been doing so well but then his weakness won out after all...and he just happened to get caught at that weak moment by a third party.

Honestly...I don't know what exactly Maru does when he stays behind...certainly his intention is to give Junno a piece of his mind, but Junno is busy hiding himself away in the bathroom, and since I couldn't quite decide whether it would be better or worse if they have a confrontation...I opted for vague. Maru definitely would have at least called out some kind of rude name through the door though >_<

And I think Junno is far too mixed up to deal with the situation, hence the running off and hiding, but at the same time he wants Ueda to feel at least a little like he wasn't just some object for Junno to rub off on >_< either way it's still a pretty damn jerky thing for Junno to do!

I didn't actually mean to make Junno out to be such a jerk...I hope I can manage to redeem him before the part is over!!!

Thank you as always for reading and for paying such close attention, your views/comments mean a lot to me :D