[multichapter] baby blue part 3 chapter 17

Oct 06, 2012 20:59

Title: Baby Blue: Part 3: Chapter 17
Pairing: JunDa
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2062
Disclaimer: All people mentioned belong only to themselves...aside from JunDa who clearly belong to each other.
Summary: In the fairy tales they fall in love and live happily ever after...but this isn't a fairy tale. How are two people, madly in love, supposed to stay ( Read more... )

group: kat-tun, member: taguchi junnosuke, pairing: junda, member: ueda tatsuya, rating: pg-13, length: multichapter

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seelenlicht October 6 2012, 20:11:57 UTC
Oh I'm absolutely agree with every single word of Ueda.
I mean I kinda can understand Junno...but still. He was such a jerk, he totally deserves such treating...

I'm totally happy for you that you finally managed to catch up!!
*hugs*

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thesecretdoor October 6 2012, 21:55:17 UTC
It's true right? Taguchi shouldn't just get to mess people around just because he can't deal with stuff...lets just hope Ueda remembers his own words >_< :P

Thank you :D Now that I have the hurdle of getting caught up out of the way, I can start fully enjoying writing this again :) And thank you for your comment :D

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~ pandanyan October 6 2012, 20:39:13 UTC
“Baby, I'm so sorry...”

*sobs* You know I was no where near crying while reading this? I actually thought it'll be an okay chapter but then when Junno said this out of nowhere I just happened to burst into hysterical tears. Oh god you know how I feel about Junno calling him baby T.T

But I actually liked this chapter. It kind of resolved things, I'm really glad that they got to talk it through and I'm surprised to say this but I'm glad they didn't kiss and hook up at this point. Ueda's right, Junno was being selfish and he shouldn't deserve to get him back in his arms that easily >_< (I'm surprised he has some sympathy for that bitch though >.< but I'm glad he's rational enough that way ( ... )

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Re: ~ thesecretdoor October 6 2012, 22:30:39 UTC
Can I be honest...after writing that line, initially I deleted it again thinking it was a bit too over the top, but then I thought...no, it will really get to Pan-chan if he calls him baby, I'm going to leave it in :D (sorry Pan-chan, you know I love playing with your emotions)

And actually...I'm going to do it again very soon. I'm really glad you liked this chapter, and got that 'finally resolving things' feeling, that's what I really hoped you guys would get from it :D But this wasn't the big thing that I had planned...have you heard the phrase 'The calm before the storm'? >_< Things are about to get pretty stormy around here...

I'm afraid there is just a couple more chapters to get through before things will turn around...hang in there though :) If I've managed to write it well enough the next few chapters should be an interesting roller-coaster ride.

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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Re: ~ pandanyan October 7 2012, 15:06:06 UTC
"sorry Pan-chan, you know I love playing with your emotions"

*cries* Now I'll be thinking every angsty moment after this is targeted at me T.T *feels victimized*

But because of this, I have a few suspicions on what might happen next so all I can do is prepare for the storm >_< *brings raincoat*

I really do hope the next part will be sunnier and happier though >w< but still...I'll be ready for the roller coaster ride *w*

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Re: ~ thesecretdoor October 7 2012, 18:43:01 UTC
Awww, not everything is targetted directly at you...I just really like how you get so emotionally invested in it, it really flatters me, so I want to take advantage of it :(

Hang in there...the good thing about storms is that there's usually rainbows after them right?

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thesecretdoor October 6 2012, 22:31:23 UTC
You seem to be really busy with work lately, I hope you're not over-working yourself dear ♥

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thesecretdoor October 7 2012, 18:45:57 UTC
Good, I'm glad the load is a little lighter :)

Things are pretty messed up right now between them, and though they're both as much to blame as the other, they're really just wound up with each other I think, and looking for excuses to accuse each other of stuff :(

Thank you for your comment :D

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racanai October 6 2012, 23:01:45 UTC
This chapter is so ♥♥♥!!!

First Tatchan's feelings of emptiness, because the room should wake memories which it doesn't, then the romantic moment between JunDa (THE RING!!! T-T) and the fight! I can't even begin to describe how perfect this all is!

But I'm glad Tatchan keeps his cool and doesn't give in. At least he's trying to get over it although it's impossible. And he is damn right about Junno being selfish! Although it's just his way of dealing with the situation.
Kame comforting Junno is so sweet! But poor Tatchan has to cry alone...

Congrats that you caught up with writing! ^^ But only six more chapters seems so less, I don't want Baby Blue to end! :o (Btw, since you posted that short clip I'm listening to that song a bit too often... XD)

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thesecretdoor October 7 2012, 00:14:42 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :D Your comment made me super happy :)

Things are about to heat up around here :D I think you might like the next few chapters...there's quite a bit of angst to come :D

I'm still planning on writing another part if everyone still wants it :) so don't be too worried about it ending too soon :) I just hope people aren't bored of it yet >_<

You like the song too? ^__^ It's really one of my favourite songs ever ♥ The original is by Tokio, if you want the full version of it I can upload it for you? It's not quite as good as the KT/NEWS version though. I ripped the audio from the KT/NEWS version too, so if you want that and haven't ripped it yourself I can give you that :)

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racanai October 9 2012, 17:59:17 UTC
Why am I so blind to see your comment only now?

I don't think there's any chance anyone is going to get bored with JunDa in the near future, so don't you worry about that! If you still have the ideas for this story, I'm sure a lot of people are going to be happy if you keep writing it! ^^ Although I'm still hoping for Half Awake and Half a World Away, lol.

I love it so much! ♥ Since I don't know how to rip the audio of a video I only listen to it while watching the vid. ^~^' Not that I mind much, ChibiKAT-TUN are adorable! I didn't know the original is from TOKIO, now I'm curious! If you don't mind, I'd be happy if you share the MP3s! ^v^

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thesecretdoor October 9 2012, 19:08:37 UTC
I have written out the plan for Half Awake...so I will re-write it eventually, but I'd gotten pretty deep into the story so it's just a little daunting >_<

Chibi!KAT-TUN really are adorable, but video is a bit of a pain if you want to listen to it on like an mp3 player or something...

Here's the mp3 of the KT/NEWS version, I didn't manage to cut it quite so well so there's maybe a sentence or two of Junno talking before the song starts, I hope that's not too distracting for you: http://www.mediafire.com/?xfnxahf939yrjmp

And here's the original by TOKIO, like I said before I prefer the way KT/NEWS sing it, but at least here you get the full song:
http://www.mediafire.com/?74gng79u7o0cqct

(Let me know if there's something wrong with the links/they won't work or something and I'll try a different site, for some reason MF occasionally decides not to upload stuff properly for me!)

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kissmegreen October 7 2012, 01:03:29 UTC
I love you for this chapter ( ... )

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thesecretdoor October 7 2012, 18:31:30 UTC
This is such a lovely comment :D

I'm glad you liked the chapter, and that it felt like coming full circle, I'd kind of hoped that people would get that from it, and kind of a feeling of things finally starting to be resolved...but to quote what I said to pan-chan, are you familiar with the phrase 'The calm before the storm'?

We're finally getting to the big action of this part :) So hang in there for a few more chapters :D

I really liked what you said for 7. too, I've been concentrating so much on what's going on with Ueda, so I wanted to try and show that Junno is suffering too, maybe even more so.

Thank you for always reading and commenting :D You know how much your support means to me ♥

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