Chapter 10: Clear

[thescarletscar]

Chapter Summary:
A.Kazumi met the other kazumi when she was about to turn 1.
Jin's entry on missing someone.

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The long night was finally ending soon. I stood along the corridor, and stared at the rain that splashed against the glass panes mercilessly. My mood was just like the rainy weather, and Papa’s mumblings played over and over again in my

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[thescarletscar]

*pats brooke_ueda* its okie ne~ glad you could feel for the fic, because this fic was beautifully written in the original language. hmm i think from now onwards, every chapter is gonna get more sad.

anyways i'm done with the translation already, so i think i'll be updating regularly~ :)

[snow_meow]

I want to read more.
I want to know how come Pi knows where Kame is all this while. I wonder does Maru and the rest of KAT-TUN know where Kame is too.
Funny how Kazumi calls Maru as Uncle Maru but YamaPi as Pi ^_^

Will Jin die? Will it be only then that he gets to see Kame?

So strange that Kame suddenly have memory lapses.

Thank you so much for your translation. *hugs*

[thescarletscar]

heh. I shall give you some spoiler!hints abt some of your question ne~.

1. Pi is the only person who knew where Kame is.
2. I used the terms 'Pi' vs. 'Uncle Maru' because daughter!kazumi is closer to Pi. :D
3. Jin won't die~
4. Kame's memory lapses to be accounted for in the later chapters~

heh keep on reading ok? I'm glad everyone's enjoying this fic. ^^ thank you!

[rubypurple]

Read everything from the beginning...

THIS IS THE FIC YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT IN YOUR LJ!!!!!! *flails*

im loving it, every single chapter!!!

im incoherent but i love you for translating for us... *hugs*

post soon!!! this fic is killing me... :D

[thescarletscar]

*nods* this is the fic. some of them call this fic a novel because of its length. i was worried about being too draggy at the earlier chapters, but i think my worries are unfounded. :)

will be updating regularly since i'm done with translation. so keep on reading~ *hugs*

[misaseba]

Yay yay yay! *I'm running out of words to be honest* XDDD I don't really know what to say except that THIS FIC makes my heart wrench!! >_< AND MAN, Jin's seemingly unrequited love is just AGH. Oh well. Just AGH. LOL

*totally incoherent as you might have noticed xD*

[thescarletscar]

i know~~ i'm kinda scared to continue posting.. (><). i'm such a baka, i cried while i was translating it -_-". but anyway, up to now, the translation's fine right? need to just get a bit of feedback from those who have read the original before. gotta make sure i'm still on the right track~

[misaseba]

Yeah, I think everything is fine!! And I was so stupid as in re-reading the fic in Chinese. AGH. >o< *double angst in English AND Chinese* LOL. I knew I couldn't handle it and I was right, because I totally teared up at the end again. ;____;

GAH! Next thing coming up are Kame's letters to Pi, right?! >__________< *heart breaks* This whole fic just seems so... hopeless and yet so hopeful and DAMN I feel SO SORRY for Kame, Pi and especially JinJin!! ;_____________________;

[shatteredtenshi]

I don't know what to say. T.T I'm really looking forward to read the rest of it...yet I'm really not in the mood to read something that will make me cry. And then the novel I'm going start writing...may have a similar style...since it's unique and all and I really don't want it to be like this story. And...I don't know what I'm trying to say.

[thescarletscar]

*hugs* its okie~ i was cursing at myself for being an 'emotional M' because i chose to translate this story and torture myself with the story again during the translation. XD.

hmm as for your novel, i think perhaps something more inspirational would be good~