Fic: Clingy

[thesandpiper]

Title: Clingy
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Characters: Cindy “Mac” Mackenzie, Dick Casablancas, Veronica Mars and a new character from the show
Prompt: 096. Writer's Choice - Switch
Word Count: 901
Rating: PG-13
Summary: She was getting scared at how easily she could hate him. It was almost like an internal light switch in her stomach - on and off, on and

Comments

[afrocurl]

Nicely done!

I can't think of anything else to say, except that.

[sowell]

OMG, I'm obsessed with that last line. Great ending. Thanks.

[thesandpiper]

Hee, glad you liked it. You have no idea how long it took me to think up a good last line.

[spikes_cj]

That whole scene was very heartbreaking. Dick is just Dick, though. Very well written, and realistic in it's possibilities of actually happening. Seems like something Dick might do, and continue to do. Thank you for posting! Lovely work.

[thesandpiper]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[kaitlincoop33]

Okay this is love! You have to continue it :D

[thesandpiper]

No continuations planned right now, but you never know...
Glad you liked it!

[paynesgrey]

Wow. This is really great. You have these two characters spot on. Excellent work and I'd like to see more of these two interacting in the future. Good luck!

[thesandpiper]

Eeee! Thank you!
Glad you liked this!