Noah (A Star Trek RPF Fanfic)

[therumjournals]

Title: Noah
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Zach/Chris
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 9,650
Summary: Zach loses Noah, and Chris is the one to find him.
Warning: character death [of the 4-legged variety]
A/N: Okay, this might seem like the most depressing birthday gift on earth. But I swear to you, she actually asked for this! Or something

Comments

[littleboycalico]

LOL, okay, I've composed myself now and can leave you a proper comment. First of all, it's a testament to how great a writer you are that you broke all our hearts and made us cry!

I love what a wonderful friend Chris is to Zach in this fic. Aside from the sexytiems, I love of attentive he was to Zach and being there for him. The scene where he finds Noah just tore me apart, and the one where Zach says goodbye to Noah at the hospital, too.

He teared up a little when he found a Christmas penguin squeaky toy still in its wrapping in the closet, pictured Zach buying it months ahead of time and actually saving it until the appropriate holiday, as if Noah could tell the difference. *sniffles*

And I love how devoted Zach is to Noah, wanting to find the perfect and happiest place for his ashes.

“And there are, like, table scraps lying all over the place. And bacon! Lots of bacon.”

“Wait, is this dog heaven or yours?” LOLOL Chris.

“Noah,” Chris said, “thank you for being Zach’s best friend. No man or dog can ever take your place.” He slid his arms around Zach’s shoulders and finished in a whisper. “But I’ll try my best to take care of him for you. I promise.” okay, I've made myself cry again.

<3

[therumjournals]

YAY, i love this comment :-D thanks for coming back to tell me about the parts that made you laugh and cry and cry again! you are awesome.