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A Wild Rumpus (Star Trek RPF Fanfic)

Aug 21, 2010 21:22

Title: A Wild Rumpus
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairing: Chris/Zach (and a side of Karl/Zoe)
Rating: R
Word Count: 7,080
Description: Chris runs away from the paparazzi, and into an adventure. Written for reel_startrek, for the movie Where the Wild Things Are. (I would consider this “inspired by” as opposed to a retelling of the movie. Additional ( Read more... )

rpf, fic, pinto, challenge

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jlm121 August 22 2010, 02:49:05 UTC

There is a heart breaking innocence and sadness in this. It's bittersweet and hopeful, and it left me with a little hitch in my chest.

It's beautiful.

therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:07:49 UTC

thanks so much. i'm so glad you enjoyed it!

foom101 September 20 2010, 07:41:05 UTC

THIS.
Seriously, just beautiful.

therumjournals September 20 2010, 11:07:26 UTC

thanks!!

the_deep_magic August 22 2010, 03:19:22 UTC

AWWWWWWW! I love this so much! What a great idea, and it was a lovely homage to the original without being too bound by it. I don't write much fic of this type because I never feel like I get the balance right, but you've done a lovely job of it!

He liked Zach so much that he thought there should be another word for it. Superlike!

So cute! I superlike the way you work the more-than-kissing in without breaking the childlike tone. Very skillfully done.

“Are you hungry?” he asked. “Because I made you a cake.”

OMG, I almost squealed a little at this line. And then under-the-blanket forts! This put a huuuuuuuge smile on my face!

therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:11:30 UTC

oh yay, this was such a great comment to get!!

I superlike the way you work the more-than-kissing in without breaking the childlike tone. - i'm so glad - i was a little worried about how it would come across, but i'm happy to hear that it worked!

thank you, thank you :-D

starshinedc August 22 2010, 03:35:44 UTC

Sweetest thing I think I've ever read <3

It had just as much innocence and childlike wonder in it that the movie had; perfect

Great job :D

therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:12:03 UTC

aww, thanks! that's what i was trying to capture, so i'm glad it worked!

punk4life1315 August 22 2010, 03:36:54 UTC

Absolutely loved this, Great work! :)

therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:12:26 UTC

thank you! :-)

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therumjournals August 22 2010, 23:12:57 UTC

yay, thanks! and i like your ending :-D