Fic: I Tried to Tell You, But All I Could Say (Part 2/4)

[therumjournals]

Title: I Tried to Tell You, But All I Could Say
Author: therumjournals
Fandom: Star Trek RPF
Pairings: Zach/OMC, Chris/OMC, Chris/Zach
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 32,780
Warnings: infidelity, drinking/mention of alcohol abuse, manipulative/abusive behavior, explicit scenes featuring OMC, dubcon (while drunk), non-con (attempted)
Summary: Zach’s new boyfriend sends

Comments

[medea_fic]

HOORAY KRISTEN!!!! I’ve really missed her in Pinto fics. She is welcome anytime as far as I’m concerned.

Oh, man. The drunken pass made me facepalm. Chris, Chris, Chris. Noooo. I really was hoping he wouldn’t do it…but of course he did. :-/

So I know Dax Shepard is not the most popular guy in the world, but I’ve always liked him…and I really really like him here, making sure Chris is OK.

Definitely worried about Chris - he’s drinking way too much. Yes, and as I get to the end of the fic I see everyone else thinks he is too. :D Even Fucking Dylan.

Okay, still hating(loving) Dylan, but this: Dylan was standing too close, wearing a bright red shirt that said “I ♥ Boys” in bold white letters. made me laugh. :)

“-then all of sudden the dude just, like, fucking chokes on it, pulls off, and barfs all over Zach’s feet.”

Oh dear. I think the Pinto Hive Mind is activating again because I just wrote a scene like this in another fic, hee! But poor Zach. And I hate Dylan for telling Chris about it.

Damn. You do this hate!sex so well between Dylan and Chris. I mean - I hate Dylan (did I mention?) but the sex is still hot.

[therumjournals]

i'm glad you liked the kristen and dax cameos...i realized that this fic is kind of strangely lacking in other ST characters. s

so much drinking. so many bad decisions.

great minds think alike? pinto minds think equally disturbing? one of those... ;-)

i'm so glad you liked the hatesex, because in the end, i think this fic may just hvae been an excuse to write ALL OF THE HATE!SEX.