The Empty Sky [Inception - Dom/Mal]

Aug 06, 2010 00:10

No one ever gets the sky right when they're creating a dream.

This irks him, but not Mal. She laughs it off, saying it's the architect's job to design structures, not imagine skies. And he understands, it's true, people aren't concerned about skies in their level design. But understanding isn't the same thing as accepting ( Read more... )

pairing: dom cobb/mal, character: mal, character: dom cobb, fandom: inception

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scoundrel4 August 5 2010, 17:43:56 UTC
This was incredibly beautiful, love it (:

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thereisafire August 5 2010, 17:50:17 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! :)

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arty_darc August 5 2010, 17:45:29 UTC
Oh, I liked this. Well-written and well-handled.

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thereisafire August 5 2010, 17:50:55 UTC
Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked it!

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thereisafire August 16 2010, 16:30:54 UTC
I was really worried about the characterisation as canon doesn't really give much to go on (especially for Mal). I'm glad my additions didn't seem out of place to you.

Thank you for reviewing, I'm happy you enjoyed the two fics! I hope to write more in this fandom. :)

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labseraph August 27 2010, 03:48:56 UTC
Wow. What a powerful exploration of how Mal come to lose her mind (and totem). Love the lyrical feel of the whole fic, the poetic cadence as Mal began to lose her grip on reality and sink deeper and deeper into insanity.

Lovely.

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