Prince of Tennis - The Bird - Yuuta, St. Rudolph (AU) - 1/?

[theotheralissa]

Sorry about the spam today, I wanted these two fics in separate posts. ^^;;

Title: The Bird (1/?)
Characters/Pairing: Yuuta, St. Rudolph, eventual Fujicest
Notes: Futuristic AU. I have no clue where this came from.
Disclaimer: Does not belong to me.

Comments

[passionfire]

This is really intriguing. It has a neat cinematic feel to it. Good job with the mysterious feel to everything, excellent hook. :D

I can tell that you're working on your rambling! Very well done. You're definitely getting the hang of it. <3

[telegraph50free]

Ooooh.

This is even better than I thought it would be, which says a lot, because I expected to squee like a madwoman and do a happy-dance. I was imagining a kind of Ender's Game/Tenipuri crossover, and I sort of still felt that, but you made it so much darker and just...so intriguing. Gah, I want to know what happens next. Like, now. T_T It's so brilliant and sparse and the whole sterile-medical setting always my skin crawl...you're such a genius, you know. You hit all the right details. That bird creeps the crap out of me, and I've never wanted to hug Yuuta so much in his life. And...ooh, I really, really like your Mizuki here, and I don't like how Mizuki is done in fic very often. <333

>_> I'll stop rambling now and ramble at you real-time later.

[vanillafire]

:O This is awesome! SO atmospheric, and I can't WAIT to read the next part - my level of impatience is unusual! o_o chalaine is right when she says it feels very cinematic! Oh man, SO good. The setting is intriguing, and poor, poor Yuutakins! He needs to find/find out about Shuuuuuusuke, and soon! ;-;

Love the last line... :o

(Love you, too ♥)

[samurai_jun]

This has a lot of suspense. I LIKE IT! It has that mysterious aura all over it!