That was so nicly written; I loved the way you jumped around and managed to not loose the reader.
Especially me, because I have A.D.D. I tend to skim through stories more often than actually reading them. I couldn't help but stay glued to every detail in this fic, though. =D
Dittoing this. It was so well written, and more importantly so in character. Neither one of them became love-confessing twits or overly sappy romance novel characters. ;o; Write moar!
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Especially me, because I have A.D.D. I tend to skim through stories more often than actually reading them. I couldn't help but stay glued to every detail in this fic, though. =D
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I liked how in character it was and you got to see two situations, not one.
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And I like the little humor bits, like the mariachi music.
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And you can never have too much NaruMitsu x3 no matter what anyone says!
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Agreed. I love these two X3
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