Comments | thenewhope: fic [i ate up the whole damn apple tree]

thenewhope

fic [i ate up the whole damn apple tree]

Jan 06, 2006 20:03

title: as the blue bird sings
fandom: NCIS
codes: Abby, with a side of McGee. set in the quiet places between "SWAK" and "Mind Games." 1,042 words.
summary: Kate would understand this.
notes: for verstehen who wanted Abby both in the lab and outside it as part of the Fem Gen Ficathon. the band Abby references is The Dirty Dozen Brass Band, one of the all ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

babylil January 7 2006, 13:13:29 UTC

Oh, Abby. I just want to snuggle her up in a blanket throughout a lot of this fic. I love it. Abby's voice is spot-on. Congratulations on making me despair of the entire NCIS fandom a little less :)

thenewhope January 7 2006, 17:49:26 UTC

wow, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! and that Abby's voice worked, cause I love Abby? but I don't really get her. it means a lot that it worked here. :)

babylil January 7 2006, 17:56:48 UTC

I'm not sure I totally get her either, but that's one of the things I love about her. She certainly seemed to be in this fic very much the way she is on the show :)

thenewhope January 7 2006, 18:01:04 UTC

thank you again. that's certainly the highest compliment when it comes to her. :D

verstehen January 7 2006, 13:14:11 UTC

Oh, I liked this! Very Abby!

thenewhope January 7 2006, 17:50:00 UTC

:D thanks! I'm so glad!

joran January 7 2006, 14:59:24 UTC

The last line, and how you built up to it, is so good.

And your Abby voice is very, very Abby. And everyone else's.

thenewhope January 7 2006, 17:51:53 UTC

I'm so glad it works. I was a bit flaily last night, thinking that maybe my Abby voice was more akin to that of a soulless 13 year old. also? a little worried that my craving for soup had gone too far. ;)

joran January 7 2006, 17:56:17 UTC

Abby seemed very Abby, so perhaps she is a soulless 13 year old?

There was something very Mary Sueish, that made me laugh. It's not inappropriate to Abby at all, but it's dually appropriate to you. and she'd been too wiped out to chug a Red Bull and stay up til church started at nine. ;)

a little worried that my craving for soup had gone too far. ;)

It seemed very restrained! A set-up and a conclusion. Rawk.

thenewhope January 7 2006, 17:59:59 UTC

hee!

and, double hee! though, also, ick! there are very few things in this world I hate as much as Red Bull. not that I haven't been known to employ its mysterious powers on a few occasions. (also? totally canon that she does that.) ;)

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geonncannon January 7 2006, 18:44:46 UTC

Very nice! I'm going to throw my hat in the "don't-fear-your-Abby-voice-is-fine" ring. ;-D Fantastically done! *bows to you*

thenewhope January 7 2006, 19:25:05 UTC

:D thank you, kind sir.

geonncannon January 7 2006, 19:27:12 UTC

*bows* ;-D

ariestess March 13 2007, 02:02:23 UTC

I'm not sure how I missed this one when the ficathon came around. I can only guess I wasn't as strongly into the show at that time... But this is a wonderful piece, even if I haven't seen the eps mentioned... Lovely!

Also adding this one to the next ShatterStorm Productions update, per your comment letting me grab your NCIS femslash... And thanks for that!