Before You Know

Oct 01, 2009 19:42

Before You Know, (Ten/Rose), PG-13
Her mother’s words are dull in her ears, blaming him for loving and losing her, as if he had a choice in either., 392

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momentmusical October 2 2009, 06:07:16 UTC
Oh oh oh ♥.

The love that tumbles from her lips as she falls back from the edge will echo off the walls of this bedroom far into his lonely future. He can see time shifting already, and the storm rolling towards them.

You break my heart with its loveliness. Absolutely wonderful!

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rowofstars October 2 2009, 12:10:52 UTC
Awww, thank you! That was my favorite line to write, I'm glad you liked it.

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zombres October 4 2009, 00:24:37 UTC
Ohhhhhhh.

My heart, it has shattered into a million pieces. Again.

Favourite bits:

The sex, obviously, but especially his hips fall and hers rise to meet them, mmmm.

Somewhere in the middle, a single thread pulls too thin and snaps, recoiling and rippling the delicate web, before fluttering into the abyss. SO BEAUTIFUL, so poignant, so perfick!

And all of the last bit. Ohhhhhh.



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rowofstars October 4 2009, 01:47:04 UTC
Thank you for the fabulous comment! I'm so glad you liked it and I'm sorry I fractured your heart hun.

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