canvas constellations

[soaring_smiles]

canvas constellations, ten/rose, adult

So this is it then, trees and ground and the dirt, moss-green and tinted brown. He has a tent and she has her pocket knife and they're going to be just fine. 2457

Comments

[fogsblue]

Oh, love this! The images and the flow and the build up were just so them :)

[soaring_smiles]

Thanks! I was a bit worried about camping being OOC but I guess it worked okay :)

[lauraxtennant]

i have tears in my eyes

oh gosh that was so beautiful and evocative. i love the way you paced it and used the repetition of 'he will, he will'

my favourite part was him mouthing 'i love you' and her not noticing asshlkfjskdgjlskjg it hurts so good

also i love a good fic that describes sex-in-a-tent ;)

just perfect x

[soaring_smiles]

Aw, thanks! :) yes sex-in-tent is always good. Er...in stories I mean *coughs*

[mylittlepwny]

there are no words for this fic

just

every word every gesture every everything bursting with their love, quiet and magnetic and electric and bursting bursting bursting LIKE MY HEART

[soaring_smiles]

thank you thank you thank you

can I just say your comments could literally be poetry in fact that's what I'll do right now. It can go up on tumblr in typewriter font like the john green ones and everybody can ooh and ah at it, k?