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Now

Jun 19, 2012 19:17

Title: Now
Characters/Pairings: 11/Rose
Rating: Teen, I really don't think this warrants M
Genre: Romance/teeny bit of angst
Word Count: 681
Summary: Careless lips and flying hair, and little things I may not tell/ And he's back, a shadow in her doorway.
A/N: Slightly terrified over here. But I saw this, and I just had to write something. And I love ( Read more... )

challenge 98, soaring_smiles

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ext_466217 June 19 2012, 13:44:03 UTC

Oh brilliant! But, ouch ouch ouch there at the end!

soaring_smiles June 20 2012, 02:30:56 UTC

Thank you! I just couldn't go past the poem, although I was tempted to make this fluff:) I guess my muse had other ideas.

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soaring_smiles June 20 2012, 02:33:17 UTC

Your review just made my broken foot better:) I love Cloen, I really do. I could never do that to him. Well, maybe not:) Rose/11 seems to be all I can write lately.

jls589 June 20 2012, 04:45:14 UTC

Cloen is just so...so earnest and adorable. It's just cruel to be mean to him. You think Ten was made for Rose, but after JE you realize that Cloen was really made for her. Everything he wanted to give her but couldn't is in Cloen.

Plus he had the best crazy hair on that beach. Half-Time Lord hair is clearly superior.

shelwass June 19 2012, 18:33:49 UTC

Oh, that was a twist I didn't see coming at the end! I was feeling sorry for poor Cloen Doctor, with Rose cheating with 11...but I loved that it turned out to be 11's fantasy. And that last line was beautiful!!!!

soaring_smiles June 20 2012, 02:36:31 UTC

Thanks! Yes, 11 does seem to be a bit rule- breaking, or at least the way that's the way he comes out in my writing. Oh, Cloen. I love him to pieces, really.

silverlunarstar July 23 2012, 00:42:04 UTC

*SOB*

I LOVE this. I love how it seems to start off as an AU (and ARG how much I hate cheating, no matter who the pairing is and especially at the beginning because, like everyone else, CLOEN!) and it's still so obviously the Doctor and Rose (fitting together - tailor-made, she's his religion, how he DOESN'T tell her he loves but she knows, Barcelona, Jack, Donna).

This. This is absolutely MARVELOUS.

soaring_smiles July 27 2012, 20:19:39 UTC

I know, becuase OMG CLOEN I LOVE YOU AND YOU'RE SO ADORABLE EVEN THOUGH I WRITE YOU EVILLY.

I have this theory he's unhinged though. *coughValeyardcough*

Thanks! I feel so flattered you liked it so much! I don't like cheating either, but I gave 11 some leeway here. Poor bloke's heartsbroken after all:)

silverlunarstar July 27 2012, 21:13:50 UTC

I'm not a big fan of evil!Cloen unless they're a good reason, BUT I can buy the Valeyard excuse, weirdly enough. XD. I just need some fluff in my life. Of course, need to balance it out with a good dose of angst. Hehe.

*Pets Eleven*

soaring_smiles July 28 2012, 16:34:24 UTC

THEY COULD RULE THE MULTI-VERSE AND HAVE TINY VALEYARD BAD WOLFISH KIDS
He would be an awesome Valeyard. And then 11 could show up and they'd have a popcorn-worthy battle.

AND CLOEN WOULD WIN

ETA: How haven't I friended you yet? You are clearly an epic person.

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ext_1353050 August 17 2012, 07:41:42 UTC

Well that made me sad. I'm not really fond of bitter sweet stories
but I just can't seem to get enough reading 11/Rose fics!