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wander_realtai in then_theres_us

Forget-Me-Not

Jul 21, 2011 21:21

Forget-Me-Not, Ten/Rose, Adult

She smiled up at him, and gently tugged him forward, to stand so close their bodies nearly touched. “Do you remember?” she asked, her voice nearly a whisper.

He frowned, a wave of uneasiness washing through him. There was so much he couldn't remember. “Remember what?”

“Your name.”

He thought carefully. A name, ( Read more... )

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wander_realtai July 22 2011, 02:56:28 UTC

Thank you! Ooh, that's an interesting take on it.

kilodalton July 22 2011, 02:53:09 UTC

Oh this is gorgeous! I love how wistful it feels!

wander_realtai July 22 2011, 02:56:58 UTC

Thank you! Wistful is what I was trying to achieve. :)

wickedgillie July 22 2011, 03:01:44 UTC

Oh, wow. How melancholy and perfectly them.

wander_realtai July 22 2011, 03:22:26 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

eskridge77 July 22 2011, 03:05:00 UTC

It isn't often that a story brings tears to my eyes, but this one certainly did...

He grinned suddenly, fiercely, because that was what he did when the terrible weight of his shrouded past threatened to engulf him, that sense of lurking, obscured horror that made him think it was perhaps a mercy that he had forgotten.

That sentence took me by the throat and shook me.

Amazing!

wander_realtai July 22 2011, 03:22:56 UTC

This comment made me smile. Thank you!

fid_gin July 22 2011, 03:15:18 UTC

Very beautiful. Sorry I'm not capable of a more in depth comment than that - the Doctor/Rose angst moves me to speechless places, lately.

wander_realtai July 22 2011, 03:24:16 UTC

:) Thank you very much! Speechless is good.