Comments | then_theres_us: Speechless, TenII/Rose, PG-13

rubberbisquit in then_theres_us

Speechless, TenII/Rose, PG-13

Mar 12, 2011 20:19

"They were never really normal, not even with the mortgage and the carpeting and all, but he would laugh at her current behavior. Laugh and then recommend a long vacation.", 1517 w

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Comments 15

thenakedcupcake March 13 2011, 02:27:49 UTC

Oh oh oh. There was such a distinct moment that sunk in when I realized who she was talking to, and I went from raising my eyebrows to this feeling of a pit in my stomach. There's this macabre joy here, a delight in the dead, and I am so in love with it. It's so mad!

Mem'd. Cause damn, ladies. Damn.

psyfi_geekgirl March 13 2011, 02:33:13 UTC

WOW

I'm

Completely...

FUCK!

vicky_pirena March 13 2011, 02:59:50 UTC

OMG!
That's so sad! I took a while to realize what happened to him (and when I did, I looked at the picture again)
This is gorgeous, really. Very gothic
Love it

housemaid79 March 13 2011, 03:42:55 UTC

...

(is speechless)

...

Wow. I honestly didn't realize just what was going on until I was actually supposed to, and then, when I did...it was with this sinking feeling, like all the air was sucked from the room...and just... Oh, Rose.

This is simultaneously so full of love and so dark...and just completely and utterly unexpected. And just how, how on earth, did you two manage to pull this off? Definitely mem'ing.

_thirty2flavors March 13 2011, 04:14:11 UTC

This reminds me of those short stories we used to read in high school English classes; there was always some kind of macabre twist at the end.

I like it.

Very eerie and unsettling, and like with all those short stories I immediately re-read it to catch the hints that didn't jump out at me the first time. Spooky. Well done, both of you.