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Mar 11, 2011 16:14

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challenge 69, :jessalrynn, :haveloved

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thenakedcupcake March 11 2011, 21:41:06 UTC
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD

This is *delightful*!! Not only do I adore the Wild West courtesy of such things as Bebop and Firefly, and things like this, but ooooooooh the END!!

Bahaha. Not. Jack. Not gonna lie, I clapped like a little kid at the end.

LOVE THIS, LADIES. Brilliant!!

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flyninthetardis March 14 2011, 15:31:41 UTC
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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tygerwulfe March 11 2011, 23:43:04 UTC
TIMEY WIMEY SQUEEEE!!!

Oh, so best ever. YAY! Oh wow, I SO didn't see that ending coming.. That was FANTASTIC!!

Best lines, to me, were this, though:

The Doctor glowered at her. First of all, blue was the most morbid color a Time Lord could wear, not that Rose was to know that. Second of all, he did not wear blue, would never, ever...

"C'mon, Doctor, it'll look gorgeous with your eyes." Rose pouted up at him, her dark eyes sincere and pleading.

... ever be able to resist that look on her face for as long as he lived.

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londoca March 12 2011, 00:10:08 UTC
Loved the ending with 10

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develish1 March 12 2011, 05:56:40 UTC
brilliant, and I too didn't see that ending coming. I think I just assumed it was Jack in there with the madam, but what you did with it was far, far better :)

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psyfi_geekgirl March 12 2011, 06:57:06 UTC
AAAAAHHHH!
Hooray for this for all of the reasons everyone has already said!!!
Yay! Timey wimey Freaky!Ten

"Everyone calls me Captain Jack," he replied. "But you can call me 'Yes, oh god, yes!', if you'd rather."

Nice collab, ladies. Great fake out!
xD

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