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Feb 26, 2011 01:17

A Nose For Trouble, Ten/Rose, PG-13
She was terrified that he was already too far-gone, or worse-lying to her-and that she’d have to watch him die for a second time… Could she stand to lose him all over again? 2,277 w.

A/N: Dedicated to the glorious thenakedcupcake on the occasion of her birthday. Happy Birthday, babycakes! Also dedicated to all of us on LJ who ( Read more... )

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thenakedcupcake February 26 2011, 09:38:43 UTC
Oh GOD. In all candid-ness, I am a touch tipsy currently, and that just makes the surreal-ness of this INCREDIBLE. The Doctor's journey through the drug.. just... god. Gorgeous. Hot. Sexy. Smexy. GUH. (I do *not* give out GUHs lightly. The last time was your damn dance floor fic that gets me all warm just thinking about it.)

As the hair she touched moved like wheat in the wind ( ... )

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 18:56:50 UTC
*guffaw*
The things that make you guh--I never will be able to predict you...
*shakes head in disbelief* Heeee!
Still, I am SO tickled that you liked it so much! It was nice to see your comment first thing this morning.
Thanks!
:D
Now. As for our wedding... I have a clause here in the pre-nup that sez u must finish the nutella fic before any vows or shenanigans are to be had! *points to your laptop* get to it--and then we can have all the "massive romance" you want!

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haveloved February 26 2011, 14:45:35 UTC
Ohhh, this is wonderful. It goes from being so funny and so them to so sad and YAY ROSE SAVING THE DOCTOR.

I love their banter in the opening scene. Rose being snarky when he's telling her to hold on, the Doctor curtly doing his I'll have you know--OOH!!, the teasing, Rose thinking this regeneration is reckless, it's all so true.

And the ending, she's so scared, and how he tries to reassure her... those last two lines are glorious. Lovely job!

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 18:59:10 UTC
Oh, YAY! Thank you so much, what a lovely comment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
:D

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haveloved February 26 2011, 19:11:17 UTC
Also: from a fellow winter plague sufferer, feel better soon! :D

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 20:45:33 UTC
Oh, the PLAGUE! Not you too!
*hands u tissues*
thanks!

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fid_gin February 26 2011, 16:01:40 UTC
This is really cute! I really enjoyed the great dialogue and the different pictures woven into the text of the story. :)

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 19:07:12 UTC
Please see icon for transcript of what was yelled when I saw you had posted a comment on my fic...

I'm beyond tickled that you enjoyed it. I adore all comments, but there are some people--and you are one of them--where I wear the comments like charms on a bracelet because they seem like rare precious gifts. I don't hear from them often, but it makes me feel like I'm doing something right when I do.
Thanks!!
:D

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oceans_of_nat February 26 2011, 16:29:39 UTC
Beautifully written and so in character :) *love*

Many delightful details tucked throughout: As she stood, friction against her stockings whispered the secrets of the universe. But he already knew those.

and some nifty puns! furthermore 10 points for mentioning Captain Jack.

The End.

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 19:10:29 UTC
Oooh, thank you!!
Hee hee! Ten points for Jack? My Beta will be so pleased--I had that line on the chopping block and she made me keep it, so bully for her! :D
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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professor_spork February 26 2011, 21:20:53 UTC
Oh, but this is gorgeous.

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psyfi_geekgirl February 26 2011, 21:41:05 UTC
\o/
Thanks!! :D

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